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A New Sub.ject

Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 2:26 pm
by Immortal Jav
Rambo Knife Dismantle ya belly-Ya fam know
-ill light a candle to ya flannel and disconnect ya tele(phone)-
-i come in a Inferior Pack-
Your inner-exterior is slit quick-when i rip through ya back
when it comes to a gram-ill slip you a pack
dismantle the middleman hotter than fifty kettles burning the track
yearning the fact, its a hurdle im already after the metal & Mack
Dim fortress no candle's lit-ill fiddle with the darkness of black
cardiac arrest blunder-under this fatal attack
The missionary made me a monster under attack
Flossing with diamonds. till my dough fall flat
we always draw chips with hard dicks
*You only drop hollows with fully loose clips*
i live scarface vividly
-dont fit in the mix-before ya get your wig split & get hit for ya lady's digit's

Re: A New Sub.ject

Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 2:55 pm
by M33Kish
"when it comes to a gram-ill slip you a pack
dismantle the middleman hotter than fifty kettles burning the track"

:P good shit lol

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Re: A New Sub.ject

Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 11:41 pm
by Defiance
ha your flow is good, got some good lines in there ^ agree with him on that barr

but none the less why drop a flow thats not even enough for a mixtape slot.. kinda of a waste of a written

but none the less feelin your style easy to read, very enjoyable for a quick read

stay ^

Re: A New Sub.ject

Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 12:41 am
by Immortal Jav
thanks appreciate the feed fellas

Re: A New Sub.ject

Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 11:19 pm
by Immortal Jav
Thanks For Feed Rellik