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Pacing (took my time)

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Video here >>>>>> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DvZBQ1oE9WE
Lyrics here >>>>>>

Simmering over syllables, for an alphabetical silhouette,

The vowels wound intricate, with love passion and a wee bit of crack,

The verbs check the lines in place, the nouns no lesser then that,

Unintentionally seen as a rap,
But my intentions tend to do that,

When I spit from Cardi-Yak,
I roll my flow and seal it with ear wax,

Then I blow the forums up with send-text, I'm stickin all 12 of these bars, re-flex,

My minds somewhere stuck in key-west or the valley, where the monster mast-your-bait high on the cali,

Words complex as ever hardly,
simple sweet Salivating sentences,

Spitten with precision precisely, complimented by delivery that's real rugged and raunchy,

A triple R threat, tv 13 couldn't get ratings off me,

My new attempt is simply starting, but my old one left me with no script and a coffee,

So I'm no-dozing and or nodding, till fate wakes me up with breakfast knocking.

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The Meek Shall Prosper... So they say :P
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a triple R threat tv 13 couldn't get ratings off me
i thought that rhyme was really dope props
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Re: Pacing (took my time)

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lyrics is nice man i admire your vocab. delivery is indeed real rugged and rough, would be superb if you got a better mic and rap this on a beat.

good stuff man.
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