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First audio drop.
Video here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bv5gVPqx0PE
Lyrics below >>>>>>>>>>

Ima spit a couple bars on dumb shit,
Flow is absent style stagnant,
And my mind is with the span kids,
Think im rappin,
Nah just jappin,
Face is serxi satisfaction,
On that bust your bitches back in,
Not that stupid,
Just real foolish,
Pockets sound like clinkin bullets,
Send Salaams to christian pulpits,
Disrespectful to the fullest,
I rock new shit,
Your fits new-ish,
GED or get a clueless,
Flow retarded,
Pussy?
Gaurd it,
Water all it like a garden,
Just last hour hit the movies,
Sat to see it through the credits,
"Sucker punch"
Them bitches timeless,
I like blind chicks,
Six sense this dick,
Ratchet rhymes and magic lingo,
Im too simple,
Ballsy bimbo,
I pop pussies like a pimple,
Then hail mary out the window,
I can save you but i drive slow,
Mind your manners,
Get your jaw broke,
This audios an evo choke hold,
My shit reads right with my eyes closed.....

FIN.

Well structure of the flow is rather unorthodox, but I can dig it. You should do one to a beat, so we can better see the style man. Your delivery on this is fast but I can admire the fact that you took the time to articulate everything. Your personality seems cool, but the whole "fuck you" at the end made me want to record a diss track against you lol. On a side note, props for having the courage to expose yourself in what looks like a classroom corner lol. A lot of people refrain from showing themselves, and you did quite the opposite; showing u as a person which is commendable. Nice drop man, and thumbs up for showing you don't need fancy shit or a beat for that matter to rap.

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Preciate it panda but actually thats the weed room in the basement. the chalkboard is for all the cool people I smoke with to write their name on it so I can blackmail them later.

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i really like the shit .honestly it was tight and it fits right you should do audio. props