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MonuMental -- Smoke Town
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:03 pm
by MonuMental
Writ, spit, and produced by yours truly. My boy Grand Fanali overlaid the 808's and whatnot, so props to my homie.
2. Smoke Town.mp3
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Re: MonuMental -- Smoke Town
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 4:53 pm
by Loon E Lou
this is dope man. the beat is ill. pretty lay back. i like that style you got. real lay back, relaxed, and my type of subject. as for a smokin track, eeeeehh iunno about the beat. its dope but iunno about it bein a smokin track if ya feel me. clean production. you got a smooth voice that reminds me of a west coast feel. you got good lyrics. i dont know flowing is your bread an butter, but you carried yourself pretty well. i liked the keys on the beat. real elaborate. good track tho man. nice to hear some new stuff.
Re: MonuMental -- Smoke Town
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:44 pm
by MonuMental
Duely noted and I appreciate the feed, bruh.
Re: MonuMental -- Smoke Town
Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 1:12 am
by Audible Thought
This is dope, i like the beat. FLow is on point and your voice sounds very bone thuggish especially on the chorus. One thing i could say is to work on your delivery, you get a little too monotone at times. overall this a dope piece keep writing.
Re: MonuMental -- Smoke Town
Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 2:49 pm
by Immortal Jav
that was so laid back.. dope ish dude props
Re: MonuMental -- Smoke Town
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:15 am
by Nah
I like your rhymes nice flow and lyrics but I gotta agree with Loon E Lou that the production doesnt fit the "get high" topic. The piano gives it a dark/grimmy feel that affects the overall atmosphere of the song. Track would be perfect if your dope rhymes are supported by some snoop dogg type beat you know i'm saying.
Re: MonuMental -- Smoke Town
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:23 am
by The Hand of God
i'm not a fan of smoke songs in general
i don't think that this beat fits the subject either
if you switched the beat to something different it could be dope though
Re: MonuMental -- Smoke Town
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:24 am
by MonuMental
I appreciate all the feedback, folk. I'll def keep everyone's suggestions in mind.
Re: MonuMental -- Smoke Town
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 12:17 pm
by ShysT
This was pretty sick, liked the hook, somethin nice to lay back and smoke a spliff to. Only thing i could say is try to elevate your rhymes, get more creative with that shit....peace
Re: MonuMental -- Smoke Town
Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:53 pm
by TreTru
vocalz sound pretty well mixxed my dude.. not much to say about it ..flo presence is all on..but i will say that beat def aint worthy of the concept..just not a very good beat..the rest is fire homey..keep droppin hot shit..