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Audible Thought
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Yonkers Remix

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lTT5fdeL6w[/video]

The sound quality might be a little muffled from youtube, 480p makes it better.

Lyrics:
this is a side you never seen before
like skywalker y'all will never know what it really means
you skinny jean fag lookin fiends mtv crack
attack like the last mac a fatman eats
my raps complete, an overdose of pheromones
lure you fuckers in then put u in a state of comatose
nobody told you to listen u should've stayed in posiiton
and hold ya ears like a christian being preached a religion
blah blah blah its fiction, no no no its real
symbolistic to a power like masonic seal's

fuck a mason, ill take a pencil and erase him
with the lead end and bomb a temple on occasion
im not an angel, im more like a space invader
independence day swag without the happy ending
my rents think im pretendin when i say that i am crazy
but i know my shit is dope im sheddin light im never shady
wait, did you really think that i am crazy
on these beats of course but on the streets i am a fucking force

you think that this is dark? its not even the half of it
u wanna see the dark then the read the history of catholics
but wait you fuckers never read so just try to imagine it
but wait you fuckers can't imagine u living in fantasies
i guess theres no point to even rap in metaphors
y'all wont understand that im diverse like galapagos
i'll do it for the hell of it im kicking with the demons
learned a thing or two and now im thinkin of thieving their legion
turn the tables rip the labels now theres no name to my grievance
its ironic im divine rhyming underneath the cement
"Until we're all free fuck the world pass the weed, life ain't what it seems y'all we chasin fantasies"-Lastchild [R.I.P]
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Re: Yonkers Remix

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Two words. Very unique. I was mad skeptical at the start wen u came in but then i got into it n thought dam! I havnt heard nothin like this. Keep this up man we need difference on the site sometimes yo!

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Re: Yonkers Remix

Post by FlipSide »

It sounds dope except for the sound effects you used. Id like to hear the real u go HAM on this beat. Good writing tho... Keep ya flow up. its tight over all
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appreciate the feedback
"Until we're all free fuck the world pass the weed, life ain't what it seems y'all we chasin fantasies"-Lastchild [R.I.P]
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Re: Yonkers Remix

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i wasnt really feelings this at all.. the effects like Flip said, wasnt necessary and i wasnt feelings the 1st 2 verses... but the last verse.. man lyrically was just awesome to me.. IMO the 3rd verse redeemed the rest of the track.. and the long "hook" part got annoying... but it was decent..
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Re: Yonkers Remix

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i thought it was good.. it sounded good. even if the quality was off a lil
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