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THIS IS A CLUB JOINT BASED ON ANIMAL SIMILIES AND WORDPLAY..TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK....I WANT TO MAKE THIS A RADIO SONG....THE ZOO IS THE CLUB

Chorus:
You think you're an animal?We're animals too.
We're at the "zoo" doing what those animals do.
So if you're an animal know that we're animals too.
Cause animals do what they do when they at the zoo.

VERSE:
Pull up to the club in a Navigator..
An animal from head to toe,penguin suit to alligators.
As I let my mane remain under my top hat.
Them kangaroos let me enter the jungle cause I'm a tomcat.
Step through the door and see a lot of beavers hungry for wood.
The heard is getting restless now they're stomping their hooves.
Sit back with some skunk and a little bit of yak.
Just waiting for my chance to pounce on a kitty cat
We're kings of this jungle and dog I ain't lion (lying)
Killer bees that bumble one sting's got ya dieing.
Enough about that..Let the zoo get wild.
Put your hips in a death-roll like a crocidile.
Go ahead chickens..shake and girate.
If pigs enter the place we can migrate..
Back to my place but for now we're chilling
I'm an animal so technically I've got no children.
Prey is all I see like fish in the sea.
I'm a hammerhead baby and I'm showing teeth
I'm a shark looking for an angel fish
Game so thick orangatangs can't hang with this.
Now we're swinging on "trees" back to my house
where she swallowed my bait like a large mouth..
Bass and in fact...
I was fishing for sport so now I'm tossing her back

Nicee! I never read something lie this before. The hook was also pretty cool.

Enough about that..Let the zoo get wild.
Put your hips in a death-roll like a crocidile.
Go ahead chickens..shake and girate.
If pigs enter the place we can migrate..

Loved these lines.
Real creative post. !
I'd love to listen to the song !

this is pretty good lol

shit reminds me of the GZA song on "legend of the liquid swords" on that simile tip comparing people to animals and shit. good drop tho man.

was feeling the whole bit

Damn man this was smart dawg. Haha. You hit that shit perfect. Flowed kool, and i didnt think u could pull it off.

Go ahead chickens..shake and girate.
If pigs enter the place we can migrate..

One of mt favorite lines on this.

Id like to hear this on a track man. Nice job

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thanks for the comments ya'll...in regards to RELLIK...that line was intended to talk about the hoes in the club...ones looking for dick...LOL...it's all good though