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everlasting Bliss, My getto passage is passive in the past-Tense
Constructively Stabled, To Extract You From A Heavenly Devine Rapture
The mind Skills of a Masterful-Bastard
My craft skills,make my Scorpion tail filled, with constructive poison
My fingertips are built moisten, But Make a implosion
That Spark orbs in the ocean, Quicker than 15 min like the geico Slogan

-- Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:12 am --

No One?

it was decent dude

yeah it was allright a lil weak on the effort side come on 3 barres WTF man i could write more than that in 5 minutes dude...

the reason you dont get fed on a 3 barre drop is because its not really a written its more of a cypher type drop. up your game homie

finish this and I'll rate...decent start though

Not bad man, needs to be longer tho

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