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Beat is dope.....

The hook is loud for ya pitch. Good vibe to it tho...
Smooth flow.. tho the material should have more content. Felt like u were waiting for the beat... I Feel That With A Lil More Energy u Can kill This.. I Also Dont Like How U Left The Hook Late As Fuck... Like U Didnt Do Enough Work.. For The Second Verse.. The Quality Is Shit But i Think U Killed It.. I Dunno If Its The Head Phones Im Using Tho.. The Third Verse Kinda Fell To The Feel I Had With The First.. All U Need Is More Consistency. Try To Keep The Energy Even On All Verses. Over All... It Was Coo.. Keep Droppin Kid

-- Wed Mar 23, 2011 1:09 pm --

Just Noticed Theres Two Of Ya... LMAO... Reason Why i Notice The Difference

Ok Rellik and FlipSide all three verses are different people haha

I always like your drops temp..but I agree that the chorus is not up to par for you...it's loud and off key...flow was smooth but still need projection in that voice...more swag....heard better from both of ya'll but still doing your thing so keep it up....

-- Thu Mar 24, 2011 6:27 am --

hey bro...you need to finish up that popular remix....i like that type of song for your style...it fits perfect....certain songs fit great with your style...find that nitch...and popular mentions Grimm...lol

U forget about me or whaaaaaa? Lets do it up dawg

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FIrst off that beat is dope, secondly no disrespect but the chorus is horrible. Flow is on point, keep practicing on the delivery and you could definatly have a professional flow going. The lyrical content is bland, there was no real direction just straight spittin.

keep doin what you do u definately have potential.