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with a fuck mind state i'm stuck in my ways
on hells high way wondering if i chose the right faith
you might say in vindictive bitter and unjustified
if you wonder why just look in to my fuckin eyes
a musty pride cause its stinking and blurring my vision
i'm learning my wisdom by burning my prisons
ears burnin to listen but i tend not to hear shit
with no clearance i'm hittin my head cause i fear this
it appears it's too late for me to make up my mistakes
til this shit breaks like i wasnt swift enough to hit brakes
i feel dis-placed like a piece from a different puzzle
i cant be muzzled muffled even when it all crumbles
sometimes i stumble cause i'm missin a sure foot
life sure took all the fun out of life making my nerves cooked
im sure hooked to the lifestyle even when its lacking
waiting for life to happen while i stare down my inner dragons
this winters dragging and it pulling me outta control
i'm doubtin my soul can pull me outta this hole
the ammount of the toll is a price i can't muster
why'd i trust her? now i'm trapped in this filibuster
feeling like cornel Custer like i'm riding to my own death
following the stone steps leading me outta context
my bones stress under the weight of the earth
so i'm stating my verse hoping that im not making it worse
im laying disturbed feeling overwhelmed with incompetence
in sins rotten flesh cause i'm still trying to find my way outta this



upping this shit

nice scheme bruh
I'm feeling your wording and imagery was nice
and your use of different sayings was most def a good thing
overall I think this was a awesome written

keep up

keep droppin gems

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THANKS for the feed man

uppin this shit

awesome man,you got some sick flow.

Good title, VERY good scheme and imagery as well. This is true lyricisim.

Loved the shit

thanks for the feed guys

-upping^^^