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5 bars.
House rules.
Check before drop.

-- Sun Mar 20, 2011 1:01 am --

check check.

check

im droppin by tonight.

-- Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:28 pm --

Check this dirt fiend, wit rhymes more unwanted than herpes//
Dont mean Halo when I say I could kill an Elite at age thirteen!!//
You jus a hurt queen, A star puncher but he never told one//
hold one or sold none?, no jus got stuck up under tables like old gum//
Ya only know ruined scripts, chewn dicks an bruised ribs//
Truth is Ill leave ya "skull on your T" after I blast ya wife n two kids//
Dont needa reason to make this kids "Neck roll" like jackie gleason's//
Ya mind seizin, must be, to challenge the king when you cant even beat grimm!!//
Elite please, a punk with weak steez but think u got the hottest hooks//
The type to get robbed an shook U jus an actor, keep the characters in the comic books!!!//

Bar1-S/E
Bar2-S/E
Bar3-Reference to The punisher comic.
Bar4-Jackie Gleason's necks hang like sleeve of wizard so to speak.
Bar5-S/E

Jaxx your shi* don't sell, Like stolen magazine's of xxl
So How you prevail?
Wanna provoke Doom, ill Slit You With A Mask worn by: mf doom
Jaxx Talk About nerdcore, You wouldn't be hot Under the layer of earth's Core!!
That's Why You Hide Behind The mask, because your face looks like executed blood & gore
So check before You step too me, unchecked like your unwarranted herpie's, Please you 20 & Barley Act like a potential Emcee, So next time don't step too me!!!

...uppin votes?

Wow. Kinda onsided throughout on all cats. Jaxx ur tore this one up man. Personals, punches, flow. Cat sweep in other words. Elite, um, i aint a battler at all but damn dawg. That was hard to read, specially after readin jaxx verse. Keep at it tho. Youll learn alot here


Vote goes to jaxx

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1-0 uppin

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punches

jaxx had some real nice quotables
Elite had more basic stuff

Flow

jacks flow and scheme was realy tight
elites was all over the place

personals

both had some personals
but Jaxx wins it in my opinion

vote+ jaxx

I'll have to agree with the others, jaxx kinda run away with it, elite didn't really get goin in my opinion, nowhere near as good as other shit I've read by him.
Vote jaxx

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thats the KO.