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Evans - The Thrill Is Gone Freestyle {Versatile}

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Evans - The Thrill Is Gone Freestyle {Versatile}

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Check out this verse, I did it a while ago but its just showing a bit of a versatile flow compared to my first tune!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jLgTKUjH9pc

Let me know what ya think, constructive criticism very welcome!

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Last edited by Evans on Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:57 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Evans - The Thrill Is Gone Freestyle {Versatile}

Post by Livenlearn »

Good Work man, I like the word usage, the imagery and message u conveyed...you got a nice track here, the flow was on point, energy and topic were conveyed nicely, only thing I would considered is dropping again over a better beat, besides that nice job, keep it up...
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