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heres another one off my new album. hope yall enjoy it. feed an get fed

Yo, that was very dope man...Probably the best I've heard from you...The beat was catchy, the intro was str8, I like your verse the best, as the second verse wasn't as good and took a lil away from the song, but its still dope...Really good job, quality material, hopefully u get more feed and views...if u get a chance check out my drop at http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-l ... 20926.html

Thanx man. Im actually the second verse but thas ku. Appreciate u takin the time. Ill peep ur drop as soon as get home man. Thnx again

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ooops srry man, I hate giving negative criticism without any advice, so on a second listen ur verse really isnt that bad, I have to get use to your voice tho...the one thing that stuck out to me would word placement and vocab...u try to squeeze to many words sometimes or u don't let them hit the beat right, either way with more practice ull get it down...also vocab just more syllables and a more technical style would help the delivery, besides those two things ur str8 man...again nice drop

haha. thanks man. i appreciate the constructive critisism. ill deffy take a wack at some multi syllables.

I Liked ur verse tho.. i dunno bout giving advice on it. over all i think i think ur verse was better than ya boys. had that crisp sound. No falling behind on the beat.. keep on droppin famo

-- Fri Mar 25, 2011 1:04 pm --

I Liked ur verse tho.. i dunno bout giving advice on it. over all i think i think ur verse was better than ya boys. had that crisp sound. No falling behind on the beat.. keep on droppin famo

'dope like i hit rocks'

i didn't like the intro though, shit confused me at first