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This is the first tune I've recorded and I'm looking for feedback as I'm eager to improve!! Peace

http://www.reverbnation.com/EvansArtist

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5sOYIEng2E

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Thanks for the feedback, the lyric you didn't quite catch was "Breed a hundred aliens, sexing like we're rabbits, create my own race and see a planet with my face carved in the side, from a thousand years to date" Its actually one of my favourites from this song to be honest with ya!

Also this track isn't near any of my strongest rhyme patterns/structures which is partially why I named it The Taster, you'll hear some of that soon trust me!

Respect for the feedback again, its nice to hear someone breaking down and listening in depth to my music.

This is cool man, nice relaxed flow, doesn't seem like your rushing it much which is good.Your annunciation is dope compared to a lot of artist I've heard with your accent. So props. Ok, I will say I'm not that into the topic. There are a billion topics out there, why does everyone rap about how awesome they are lol. Crazy hair man. I also listened to the video for "thrill", and ->" Listen to me paint a picture, with me tongue i found my art" <-- I want to hear some more stuff like that. Be easy man, keep droppin