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eLmo - Punk Rock Freestyle
Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:53 pm
by eLmo
Re: eLmo - Punk Rock Freestyle
Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 9:33 am
by Loon E Lou
Aight man, beats dope. You got a mad consistant flow jus iunno. Real mono tone so regardless of what ur spitting, it all sounds the same throughout. Maybe some emotion or a switch up during the flow would keep it more interesting. Other than that tho, looks like u kno what ur doin. I wish i could quote sumtn but like i mentioned, it all kinda jus sounds the same. This the only track ive been able to feed in a bit so im not disappointed on clickin urs first. Keep it hot mayne
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Re: eLmo - Punk Rock Freestyle
Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 12:06 pm
by Sentus
Well I deffinitely wasn't expecting to hear that lol. Your flow and lyrics were dope but the delivery wasn't really my cup of tea. I couldn't understand you sometimes and it didn't really match the beat that much. Keep it up though
Re: eLmo - Punk Rock Freestyle
Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:22 am
by Defiance
the flow was off but quite interesting, like the song though, kind of an odd style you got tho.. keep um coming
Re: eLmo - Punk Rock Freestyle
Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:13 am
by Elite Punisher
that beat was Dope Punk Rock!!
-- Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:13 am --
that beat was Dope Punk Rock!!
Re: eLmo - Punk Rock Freestyle
Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 9:22 pm
by Kause mc
You know what? Im sure you know who warren G is. His style would suite you down to the socks! I can see potential bro keep this up but switch your delivery up. Very true bout the monotone thing but hey thats easily fixed. Keep doin ur thing man
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Re: eLmo - Punk Rock Freestyle
Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2011 11:15 am
by The Hand of God
there were a bunch of times where i couldn't understand what you were saying
like, you'd not annunciate words or you'd try to jam a bunch into a line