The " 1 " (LivenLearn)
Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 11:09 am
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Re: The " 1 " (LivenLearn)
Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 1:07 pm
Damn sick song as usual from you. The flow and energy of the track was phenomenal. You've improved so much. If you got a more clear delivery you would be amazing
Re: The " 1 " (LivenLearn)
Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 2:14 pm
Thnx a lot for the feed man, very much appreciated, on the delivery comment do you mean pronounce my words better, or slow my speech, Im just tryna understand how to make it better so I can improve....glad you enjoyed it, and if your down for a collab let me know and Ill send somthin your way...
Re: The " 1 " (LivenLearn)
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 1:08 am
I was talkin pronounce your words better.
And yeah I'm down for a collab
And yeah I'm down for a collab
Re: The " 1 " (LivenLearn)
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:22 am
thnx man Ill work on that for sure, also I got a track for u, but i need to write and record it, so ill send it to u by the end of the week...
Re: The " 1 " (LivenLearn)
Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 2:32 pm
damn dawg, beat is hot as hell. you got awesome presence. you fill with "nigga" alot. not that its a bad thing but it stands out alot. good imagination on the mixin. quality sounds pretty dope. no flaws on this end from what i hear. dope lines. you got me bobbin my head through the whole track so mission accomplished on keepin it hype. ONLY suggestion, cut back on nigga, and your perfect. unless your a nigga, then i guess its ku. dope track man. really well thought out throughout the song. 9/10 on this end. 
Re: The " 1 " (LivenLearn)
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:36 am
Thanks for the listen man, glad u enjoyed it...Yea I use it as a filler a lot, might start reducing that, we will see...But um thnx for the feedback, and hopefully I can keep making good music..
Re: The " 1 " (LivenLearn)
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:55 am
Thnx for the listen man, appreciate the feedback, need as much as I can before I place these tracks on the mixtape, so I will be raising these vocals for the finals mix...
Re: The " 1 " (LivenLearn)
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 12:13 pm
i thought this was pretty good homie, but I agree you gota work on your delivery and turn the vocals up.....despite that though I actually reall enjoyed this yo....i'll be lookin for nore drops from you....keep it up
Re: The " 1 " (LivenLearn)
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:22 am
Thnx for the listen, glad u enjoyed it...Also thnx for the feedback, will be def. turning up the vocals and maybe even re-spit it for the mixtape version...pz 1