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maybe like it might not

I did a song to the same beat, Its on my reverb page called calling, so gr8 choice in beat selection...Your dubs were way to loud they need to be turned a lot and pan a lil, I didn't like that u started during the singing on the hook in the first verse but the lyrics were str8 and the content was something I could relate to...Im not sur eif the second verse is you cuz it sounds a lil different but if so I like that verse the best, I felt more emotion there and a better flow, not bad overall, just some minor clean ups would make this a hot song...

Dude, you're like a success story in the making on illest. You started dookie, and nothing but elevation since. I want to say, again, best flow ive heard from you yet. Not too big on the topic, but oh well. Your boy does rather outshine you to be honest, but its a good thing, since youve been working with this other cat, your flows been improving like a mofo. Almost as if he challenges you to not get shown up so you put your best foot forward. Good shit man, keep dropping heat.

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First off, dope beat.

2nd, like livelearn said the dubs a bit much.

Also I like the flow a lot in this one, very consistant!

Like the beginning flow pattern after the first hook, really dope.

I enjoyed the last verse alot more then the first, you sound a lot more confident in it. Like certain in your words.

Good shit bro, keep it up!

thanx appreciate all the feed and yeah im trying fams lol.......jus got to keep writting been consistently doing it for awhile lol got a lot more work to do tho im still not satisfied with this or any other song i have done yet

im still not satisfied with this or any other song i have done yet

You never will be man, your doing a good job homie. No sweat

thanx fam appreciate it

not bad like the emotion on this one.Flow sounded a bit rushed in some places but thats just my opinion, nice track regardless keep it up homie

thanx bra appreciate the feed

i think your vocals are too loud, but that could be these headphones

second dude was nicer than the first dude

first dude's lyrics were better IMO, just he sounded like he's not been rapping for as long as the second dude, his flow was kind of off

appreciate the feed