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I push the rewind button and playback thoughts,
How could we end it like this? My minds so lost/
Repatin them words I guess you gotta pay the cost,
With shattered dreams, hopes, memories, and the lines that you crossed/
I tossed them all away, broken promise after promise,
All I asked for was your trust and for you to be honest/
All the nasty things you said and you expect me to comment?
My response to that......I'll get right on it/
I'm happy now can't you be happy for me,
All the pictures set a blaze when even my own daughter ignores me/
I'm torn to pieces, I guess my life was stuck in the creases,
But now I'm really blessed like I was face to face with jesus/
Believe this, August 10th 2010 my whole life changed around,
I'd never change it again/
Remember when you were little and you were gettin in trouble,
Preparing yourself for now so you survive through the struggle/
Everytime I think at night, to myself I might mumble,
What would my life be like now if all of my thoughts crumble/

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this shit is the tightest thing I read from you homeboy...I can def relate...good job I dont even want to break it down 4 feed because I like it and it is an emotional peice...you know emotional thoughts are never complete because they lack the analysis...hence nothing you can say when someone says some real shit

Man you definitely got that right. Thanks

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I push the rewind button and playback thoughts,
How could we end it like this? My minds so lost/
Repatin them words I guess you gotta pay the cost,
With shattered dreams, hopes, memories, and the lines that you crossed/
I tossed them all away, broken promise after promise,
All I asked for was your trust and for you to be honest/
All the nasty things you said and you expect me to comment?
My response to that......I'll get right on it/

Siick Build-up. It had a lot of emotion here, and It reminds me of when I'm too hard on myself. Everything else I can't critque because it's personal. Overall I would leave this drop the way it is, It's great the way it is.


Good Drop

Thank you

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Nice piece, bruh. I agree with all above.