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dopr your verse

Ayo,fuck it...This kats a New Age Dreamer,in hes pussy l stick a Few Plates Deeper,n You Way Weaker,i mean nobody "digs yo shit'" not even a Sewerage Cleaner||Gainst Chess this Sonny's Game Is Burnt!and at the same time if he laughs?Funny Lame Is Murked,screw the nigga!!cause I can "Out Shine Hymm" standin outside a Sunny Day In Church||Looking at ya,I'd see a Bitch Slapped...Stitches,Wouldnt spit a meter line,id quit rap if this Kid Rapped Inches...step back,i can have you "missing,kid"...like Kidnapped Infants||Make Jimmy Burp Out,hes spits he's a lame pxssy n I wouldnt rap 4 ya Brittle Hurt Crowd!Cause if "Jim Buff" then it's only a Little Work Out!!||He Nuts Brother...N I Beat Up Fxckers...Man "nobody likes Jam" we prefer Peanut Butter!!

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-- Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:28 am --

Expo - Outshine Hymm : Outshine Him...A Hymm Is A
Church Song,Hence The Play In The End...An Infant Is Well...A Baby Inbetween the ages of 0-5 I think?Not Sure Correct Me If Im Wrong ,Jim Buff - Gym Buff...Please leave me feedback,i could do with the advice.

you see me bitch slapped well i got the quick raps/
i sit laugh and say bitch you need to quit that/
cos your a pawn and where im from pawns get stomped on/
your so wrong, youl be long gone that verse was your swan song/
i couldnt even read your stuff. so what you mutterin bout/
you like peanut butter cos u love the nuts in your mouth/
thats why you get tea bagged, i relapsed in rehab/
broke out come after you and suffocate you with my weed bag/
i sail the sea with my ship, you wanna be on my ship/
but shit, you cant... cos your a bitch/
got raped and loved it ill have your butt lit/
like a joint, and then ill spit while smoking you like a spliff/
dig graves and desecrate, enslave your mental state/
englufed in flames incinerate, eat brains for dinner gay/
so hey next time you think that you set in your ways/
im right across from you controlling the game thats check mate/


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/open- ... ml#p163624
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/justice-vt20717.html

'u like peanut butter coz u love the Nuts In Ur Mouth'...mad bananas man,word 4 the Battle...Vote up please.

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I liked chessboards style better....but the termenology you use throws your whole rhythem off dude...JimmyJam....since you went second you flipped what the artist said when you said nuts in his mouth I dont know if house rules let that slide but if it does my vote is for you
vote Jimmyjam

Alright 1-0 Thanx 4 Voting You,Uppin 4 More Votes

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Thanx 4 Voting...1-1 Uppin 4 More

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-- Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:12 am --

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chess homie you need to work on your structure a bit, makes it easier to comprehend. you had some decent punches though. some of the set-ups were kinda ehh but i still give you the edge on this one.

vote-chess

Chess Had Sum Crazy Multies @ The Begining And Flow Was On Point!
His Structure Wasn't Good But The Punches Stood Out.

Jimmy Jam's Structure Was On Point, His Multies And Punches Were 2 Nice @ The Begining I Thought Chess Is Heading 4 Another L here
But Than Jam Startd Going Way Off When He Started Talking About Ships And Shit!

VOTE-chess

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Interesting styles on both sides. I think it was pretty close but I give the edge to Chess for some of his wordplay which made for some stronger punches. Every other category I would call a tie, though.

+1 Chess

-Chessboard- Took That One...../

For me jam took it, nice structure to he's barz, good battle, 2 dope rappers but my vote goes to jam

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5 Votes To Me...2 Votes To Jam...Please Update.

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-- Wed Mar 16, 2011 3:09 am --

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-- Wed Mar 16, 2011 3:09 am --

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