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ok battle

8-16 bars

due whenever your ready.

how fun it will be to spit this shit that i spit/
i was unaware that i was battlin a chick with a dick/
but this aint no chick flick, its a battle/
so hit me with your rhymes and put down ya babies rattle/
ill throw rhymes at you you can jump over these/
kick you in your stumoch till your puking up your overies/
but dont get your panties in a twist better answer this/
rhymes killl you slowly and painfully cos they cancerous/
i dont board but im always on my grind/
got so much shine that im gonna leave you blind/
then cut off the light and leave you in darkness/
got so much force like im on some darth shit/


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/open- ... ml#p163624
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/justice-vt20717.html

ok ima chick widd no dick,
but i was aware yhu talkin heliie shit,
come to my hood and we can do sumthin bout it,
sey hello to my bana clip biych,
so yhu can go on,
cuz ill eat yhu up like falaymeinyon,
cuz ill murda yhu and yhus gon,
my panties aynt in no twist,
my flows go hard break ya wrist,
cuz im like weezy a fire flame spitta,
ill destroy your ass like a one hitta quitta,
i think yhus a dude widda pussy hoe,
im tha illest shawty and ima make yhu go,
im just tryin to have sum fun, shut up bitch i aynt dun,
and im a 13 yr old white girl rappin,
my flows make yu go like wtf just happen,
i juss rocked yo ass now clean it up widd a napkin,
so ima tell yhu yhur destiny,
lil meika jus killed yo ass and this aynt tha best of me,
ima cut yhur ass open like a disectomy ! // ik its over 18 bars but ohh well

On the real tip...you need to read the house rules plus text 101...its 1 verse per battle(blind verses), which means no flipping the others lines...unless the battles states 2 or more rounds with flipping allowed...no free posting!!!

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-- Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:34 am --

^^^ that's considered a freepost, but I'm doing it to teach y'all something...

oh aight thnx doe that was my 1st battle

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I am going to vote for JimmyJam on this simply because his ideas where more thought out

Vote: Jam


had a better verse, better structure ... KEep at tho Lil M and stay active!