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When you seek the epitomy of life,it's called the ART.......of LIVING//
not far from different,but the words I've written are SCARRED....from SCHISMS//
...I IMPART.....the WISDOM,----->SHARDS......of VISIONS//
which where lost to this earth,by men who where cursed through the HEART...of GIVING//
so it's hard....to mention,.....when you see through the eyes of a PROPHET//
that this world and all its glory,is just an IMAGE that we've CONCOCTED//
a SYSTEM.....filled with OPTIONS,-->FEAR....and NO CAUTION//
as mirrors menace and mimic gimics,REFLECTING TERRORS TOXINS//
its APPARANT....we are HOSTAGE,to this REALM that we've CREATED//
Built this NIGHTMARE out of DREAMS,If this is HELL....then we MADE IT//
we FAILED....yet we PRAISE IT,like BABYLON in its GREATNESS//
we FASTEN on the FACES,then we PASS it ON as RAPIST//
Its CATCHING ON->CONTAGIOUS,....each ACT is DAWNED with HATRED//
....SLACKJAWS call us SADIST,....we are all in FACT ILL FATED//
The RAPTURE....WILL EMBRACE THIS,with CATASTROPHIC CHANGES//
don't LAUGH it OFF just FACE IT,WE are in the AGE OF AGES//

　Capitalizatoin=emphasis
.....=pause in breath
---->=on to the point
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pretty dope some of your flow seems a little off but maybe thats cos im just reading it from text might sound good outloud.

dopest ish i swear its so dope i can bag it and sell it
and if you dont get what hes saying then your kinda dumb
the best free i came across so far......

damn bro yhu kilt dhat shit made me take a second look at life but some were big words that i dont know lol but yhus a beast

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After reading the first piece and seeing the same idea tossed around
I think I get the vibe more on this one
which makes it more...evident and more emotional
it sticks out to me a bit more
I like the style when I get the idea of it though
and really feel what your saying...
as I said in your other piece...this would make a nice track
keep writing my dude!

Even the way it's enunciated in text form, you can hear it being said. Kind of reminds me of Slug from Atmosphere, and not in a bad way.