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i make haste
to lay waste
your consuming my airspace
slowly i generante
sitting back to meditate
oooh man i cant wait
for the next mutha fucker
to run his damn mouth
ima blow'em so high
yeah, in the fucking clouds
watching you fall back
to your impending death
getting what you deserve
never will i stop spitting these verbs
on my balls and my word
lyrics make ya shake
break down, halucinate
this is just the way of fate
your a beat up pussy
looking like beef drapes
you'll never have the gull
to pass these gates
fuck getting thru my boundaires
im 20 steps above you boy
you'll never get around me!
homeboy im plasma hot
wanted to battle me!?
you must be smoking crack rock
a word of advice
your flow is weak spot
and your word play.....
well.....its kinda gat
but hey hey
dont run away yet
im 35 bars in
and ive yet to break a sweat
here to wrek havok
any way you wanna bag it
your a faggot
you'll never be able to hac it
yeah my mouth pops of
pop! pop! pop!
like an automatic

Hey nick, You'll have more luck receiving feed if you drop two on others and link your stuff. BTW, you audio?

personally that just seemed like you rambled on and on from one topic to another...
your flow and structure was easy to read so thats good...your punches didnt really pack much of a punch and there where no multies...
to me it was worth reading to see what your capable of and to tell you the truth I think you could do alot better then this dude....keep posting

oh good someone who structured his shit so its easy to rea. that was a nice brag verse dude.