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After reading some feedback, this is, I guess, some free writing. Took about ten minutes, as most of you will be able to tell. Honest Opinions again. Thanks





the feedback is duly noted
floated in one ear n rested near the frontal
lobe
now i got strobe trippin lyrics
in n out the cortex flippin switches
on n off the bulb in the brain clicks
fixtures of colors and visuals pics
of flat whites and green goblins
naked chicks wit fists protrudin out the clit
throbbin
call it fruedian
call it human
still these thoughts burn holes through my cranium
really couldn fathom life any different
um
im losin scheme to a writers blockin drum
beat


(so he a beast in the street
feelin new flows from a few different critics
chronicle this kid
he so stealth like riddick)(x2)


better not be passin on this written delivery
cuz verbally ya never hearda me
strikin poets in the first degree
purposely makin gestures for ya girl to tell on me
so you can try n step
n get punked worse than fifty
over games first album drop
throw a pussy fist to my chest
n watch as the mossberg go POP,POP,POP
fifty holes filled wit shrapnel
ya brittle chest cavity collapses
lungs can no longer fill to capacity
the sirens gather wit thelines of masses
obituaries written as the wackest emcee in outlines
between blue lines his pen bled pussy
for 7 days wit weak rhymes