Hip Hop Forum

8 Bars
house rules
due midnight of the check in..

Check

check.. due tonight

Aigh main!


Expo: The New guy is a movie from 02


can't wait to see this phoney drop, he's got as much raw talent as the amount of magical Ponies Bought
I'm ill this hommies not ... so i'm a make a 'special appearnece for the New Guy' like TonY hawk/////
He ain't a rapper he's a Supporter of folk ... with less value than a Quarter of soup
An informer, a joke! ...so i'll show ya 'smug'Led faster' than Usain Bolt crossing the Border with Coke///////
Please, lil fucker ...scram! ain't original ... you got your name from shortening a peanut butter Brand
won't see another fan ... cuz he'll only 'cee-loo green and a scaredface' like his dreams of southern jams//////
I'm about to Crap on this fools shit ... cuz he 'couldn't break Q' snaping a pool stick
cuz your 'lines are softer than A high school musicals' ... there just lacking a cool kid///////
You should be Falling back, or get choked ... you ain't 'dynamiq or a rippa' so we Call this ass a lame joke!
With all that trash, you claims dope?? nope .. we wouldn't 'buy anything from smugerz' if all we had was Plain toast//////
In the time it takes you to write 1 bar, I Might create eleven and write them great, and sell-em
Watch him try and plead for blessin's ...cuz i'm about to 'bury SMU' like the Ncaa did in 1987////// http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Southern_M ... ll_scandal
Nigguhs love my content, like how a Gyro tastes ... so watch me put the 'heat to Mugs' like a micro-wave
I'll knife your face ...than have 'Mug-shot' like a murderer right after a Psycho Rage///////
Prolly the type to claim that his cousins hard ... wouldn't have a 'Car-Rear/Career' if you took a dozen cars
Leave him shook, bucked and scared ... cuz your 'Keys are fucking usless' like Cars with Push button starts///////




aigh dude, hope your as good as you say you are....j/k

G'luck

1st Vicitim


pay attention...

listen,



find out wut battery means.. as i make quix tap out frm swings that shatter his dreams
punches.? quix ain't landin'em clean..
his top pick, fuck around n drew breeze so fast i thought this wuz a fantasy league
he'll drastically bleed n passionately clings, to dear life, call'em bambi in need..
ur average, indeed.. See, if YOU 'pull out, all stops' its cuz u needa be in the passenger seat
the talented see.. i'm crushin this vet.. punish his text til he drops the ball n fumbles the rest
u'll think this punishment's death.. when i put quix in a torture rack lyk he suffocated under some breast
u can't fuck w/ the best.. I be the heir who looks quix in his eyes 4 games just 2 see the fear
thats why he gotta be Nuts to battle SmugZ........... Ironically enuff, he needs a pair
brought knives to a gunfight, next time be prepared.. Fag..! i can tell, his keys r weird
just look'n at'em..! he gives me such a shifty comfort, i'd rather sit in a beanbag chair
fuck multis n shit.. i'm straight 2 da point - i lock on ya jaw n lay it down best
n w/ 1 lick i'll send u fly'n w/ a punch & maybe some peanuts if u try southwest
i key piff or the cocaine u sniff, take a whiff.. now, all u chumps know i'm dope
so listen, if we both 'shoot up, quix' i'll get recognition - u'll die from a drug overdose
it's simple n plain.. ya gimmicks r lame.. i actually think quix is a bum w/ an alright flow
n just 2 win, i bet he'll 'Aim n sink 2 a new low' - when he could've just save 15% by switch'n to Geico






GhoZT,




i'll edit verse w/ links soon.....

cool



VOTES???

wheres the links? Im an ass, and like rules, My vote qoes for Quix, ill break down as soon as i see links. One battle being slept on is Orfadox and Sacred Verse. Thank you. You guys can easily close it.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/omni- ... ml#p163529


i'll go vote on that one tooo.


let the votes come in dogg .. .or this will never get

Quix-your lines hit harder but your flow was a lil more rugged
Smugz-your flow was smooth but you had some weak parts that seemed just that weak---like the whole bambi in need thing
vote=QUIX

d/r is evident here... bambi n dien deer life..

ur telling me smugz and smuckers is wordplay.. along wit SMU and my name ain't even SMU that's what u do track merchandise..
this site is crazy.. u can have the battle.. i don't do D/R sites.. i'll go to netcees b4 i get cheated outta win cee lo green scaredface
his name is scarface not scared face or scaredface.. lol

yall are funny dudes

-- Sat Feb 26, 2011 4:20 am --

d/r is evident here... bambi n dien deer life..

ur telling me smugz and smuckers is wordplay.. along wit SMU and my name ain't even SMU that's what u do track merchandise..
this site is crazy.. u can have the battle.. i don't do D/R sites.. i'll go to netcees b4 i get cheated outta win cee lo green scaredface
his name is scarface not scared face or scaredface.. lol

yall are funny dudes

^^dude you barely had punches in your verse, some nice rhymes but you lacked in the punches department. switching to geico? really?


my vote would go to quix as well, your name isnt SMU but SMU is in your name, its called a name flip. Quix had some pretty good punches in there. like the "mug" lines, i was diggin those.

personally ... i am dissapointed in you smugz. You came here claiming you were a punchline king, not new to battling etc. and you can't even recognize nameplay, or nameflips?? hmmm, anyhow, you had a good verse, but you had NO REAL Punches in your verse..and your multies were off. I can tell this ain't your first battle...you had some nice flow, and decent wordplay. but the Geico line ... come on dog you should no better than that

3-0

close this shit