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With a clenched fist I crushed amethyst,
In the palm of my hand lies purple sand,
The wind blew a kiss,
Upon the ground it did land,
Imagine a beach made of this........
This reads like poetry does, your set up made me feel like i was going to read a very intelligent piece, but it slowly diminished.
Blazing orange desire, the horizons on fire,
The beach lies placid afront a sunset sky,
Protecting the sun as it tires,
As the night draws nigh,
An ocean of rippling sapphire.......
Definitly poetry. Nice imagery
Beginning it’s hike to the edge of night,
Dusk blooms a perfect pearl shaped moon,
Rising from the twilight,
Dispelling the gloom,
Guided only by glittering starlight......
eh, not much i can really say about this piece. Nothing too exciting.
Nightly creations, diamond constellations,
Highlighting the pathway to the break of day,
Resplendent decoration,
An illuminating display,
A beautiful moon and star collaboration.....
Nice vocab to draw the pictures in my head.
Love requited, for a short time they’re reunited,
Under the night sky marquee they journey,
Travellers benighted,
Best friends they be,
Intrusively the looming morning arrives uninvited....
my mornings always arive uninvited too. Damn fucker huh
Eclipsed by daybreaks rising, dawn awakes,
Night unwillingly resigns behind the citrine skyline,
Momentarily opaque,
Now gloriously divine,
A truly precious and exquisite daily remake...
Vocab picked up, so it makes for a better read, but by this point, half my brain is sayin "ok, i get it, next topic".
Golden sands cupped in the azure skies hands,
An ocean crystal clear, filled with the moons tears,
Sun reflecting off the strand,
This is paradise right here
I genuinely believe I’ve just found my promised land.
Ok closer, nothing too stand out about it.

I felt as if this belongs in the poem section of the forum. Vocab is nice, but after a while it felt like you were finding 1000 ways to say you like the beach. Nice read non the less, keep posting.