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Stop frontin like ya juliet when thous known
KiLLaH keeps chickens in stock like dow jones
Bad bitches who rock furs n howl moans
Like mans best friend;slobbing on my bone
Nowadays ya doggin me out with foul tone
Chicken get in ya coupe gon fly away home
You was one of them giving me wild dome
You was In a birdgang like signin with jim jones
Gave you facetime but neva a fly stone
You werent only one gettin live in my iphone
Nah Im not drake Im far from wife prone
Fuck nicki n a minaj i'll slide wit 5 clones
Fuck love fuck stress, shorties love fuckin stress
And Ima mess who loves to fuck when stressed
If ya friends look good I might fuck ya best
Ima nut i'll nut KiLLaH on her fuckin dress
Im not tryna leave ya ass stuck obsessed
But I aint tryna walk around cuffed depressed
Sorry for being blunt like a dutch with cess
Wasn't tryna reach ya heart when i touched ya breasts
So don't stress our moments were sparks
Like empty lighters no glow in the dark
You shoulda known you shoulda known that from the start
I'm inta breaking you off not breaking ya heart

Nice flow, Nice rhymes, what more can I say, nice track...liked the feel of this one

Thnx man I was tryna get str8 to the point without overkiling the beat n drop a couple of nice quotables

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Wasn't tryna reach ya heart when i touched ya breasts

Best fucking line ever. Its cool how you stayed on point when the beat dropped, but it sounded like you were rapping down, or not vocalizing to your fullest ability. Like a lazy flow. Sounds good regardless. Good shit man, fucking line instantly cracked me up.

yeah i'm not on the wagon on this one flow sound iight but something was off about,.............hmmmm... oh yeah shit was like a 45 second drop.. damn dogg you'd think motherfuckas could make a whole song and shit.. nah i'm just clowning

on the real

vocals were too quiet i could only hear half the words, production sounded good though..

nice drop K

I like the message...like you said u droppin just a lil sumthn, it was short but it wasn't bad, got me interested in hearin to see what more u got to offer, so def. drop another and hopefully longer verse, so I can get a feel for u as an artist

First Off, Good Topic. Lol. Ite, So Beat Choice Is Iffy, But You Went In. Quality Is Good, But IMO, Too Low Compared To The Beat. Maybe Working With Some EQ And Increasing The DB Increments Will Fix That. Breath Control Is Ok, A Continuous Flow For The Most Part. Some Of My Favorite Lines From This Joint Include:

Fuck love fuck stress, shorties love fuckin stress
And Ima mess who loves to fuck when stressed

Wasn't tryna reach ya heart when i touched ya breasts

I'm inta breaking you off not breaking ya heart

Anyways, Good Shit Fam. Stay Up