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Ayo, nigga impersonatin a g, actin like he LYRICALY INCLINED
tryin to be a whealthy emcee with credit cardz CONSISTENTLY DECLINED//

Lemme take you on a ride, to imprison ya mind with some SUPREME "LOGIC"
Take some rhymin lessons, quit bein prepubesent, and ya might get to be MAINSTREAM TOXIC//

Thinkin to myself, how can he move his mouth when hes so MORBIDLY OBESE,
Coverin up his own defaults, trin to rhyme, but nigga Its HORRIBLY OBSOLETE//

I shouldnt be here by all logical explinations, but i bypassed my LYRCAL ABILITIES
Ya whole game needs a renovation,you cant touch my EMPIRICAL AGILITIES//

Constantly in fear of what he got hisself into, now hes against serious VERBAL DEXTERITY
Lookin straight through the transparency of hiz wordz, understandable with SUBTLE CLARITY//

Nigga i grow weary of you, so Lets end this EXPEDITIOUS EXCURSION
You just gotta taste of twiztids version, so back the fuck off with this MALICIOUS DIVERSION//


-Twiztid

cool vocab, but there was 2 faults i noticed obsolete doesn't match syllables with obese, and subtle and verbal don't rhyme, should be more than enough to beat lawgix though

yo,

go ahead call this flow whack, see if i give a damn
cause ya'll are more ruthless than the ku klux klan,

all of u are so bored, and u still ain't gotta job yet
so u hopped on this board, to prove u suck in flows and text

u ain't never gonna do shit, so don't fuckin try me
i'll put fear in u fags, so much, u'll go into hiding

u've always been on my dick, cause i ain't cool with mac
but i already settled the beef, so hop off my back!

see, i don't even have to end u, mac will fuckin tear ya'll apart
he'll use u like paper, scribble on it, and call it art

then when hes done, he'll just toss u in the trash
so, here ya go, why not step back from me, and go kick his fuckin ass!

don't give a fuck if i win, i'm done. peace say what ever u all want

Aiight, Votez up, and nigga chill, im not beefin with you, itz all fun na mean? (I gotta job by tha way)
-Twiztid

Daymn, been three dayz and still nobody voted.

-Twiztid

Jmx took this without a problem. He had better multis, wordplay, and personals. Nobody really took punchlines. Overall my vote goes to Jmx. Good drop though Lawgix.

Vote - Jmx

vote - jmx he took all categorys

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