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4-6 bars...match whoever drops first
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Due by Wednesday night
Sounds good?

If so, G/L and...
Czechoslovakia

Edit: Due date

Sounds good 6bars bring it

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-- Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:04 am --

omni due date was agreed for tonight im giving u extra 24hours

u set the thread up abide by yo rules dawg....

before you punk out ima drop my bars g/l

It's still Wednesday here...7pm...which means I got 5 more hours to drop...I'm on pacific standard time

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6bars shouldnt take so long...

ima drop if you no show then its mine an i gave you enough time arghtt!

-- Thu Feb 17, 2011 11:38 pm --

Search yo posts theres no votes to give props six shots five dropped KO’S//
Wana be mc diagnosed watch me serve this kid fowl like rotten eggs an burnt toast//

Kid you'll never manage think you special cause you stupid an rap in sign languange//
Your a reject ! Upon conception yo momma went to church to pray for a misscarriage//

This fools clueless while im ruthless! OMNIvore a dead sheep hanging off skewers//
It aint rumors this fags useless loss is gauranteed like a baby having edentulers//

3days for 6bars an you really wana compete? You way off par an you know you already beat//
You come off slow Yo styles obsolete! this is suicide like jumping wit no parachute from everest peak//

Ima chop yo head off rip yo skull open i aint joken all i see is an empty vessel//
Now it all makes sense you not intellectual fooling yoself thinking you something special//

Im spittin facts this clowns a joke in raps do the maths check this kids stats whats the sum? //
Battle record speaks for itself 5 to 1! battling me? I gaurantee best outer five you win none//

*earlier today he was asking Punchd Drunk to collab on audio(shoutbox)...
**we're tied with 1 win...

okay...

Like infected cuts under BANDAGES, my wRAP IS SICK and you can’t come AT IT, QUIT(ADEQUATE)
King? How?…when your battles are so below AVERAGE KID; I must be the trash man, I’ll take your verse and GARBAGE IT

I'm here to RIP YA THRONE, SPLIT YA DOME, and watch ya crown HIT THE FLO', YOUR REIGN IS...
Over, and with weak spits, I wouldn't 'collab' with kid 'sober', cuz I bet a 'nep tune' is 'close to ass', call it URANUS*

'King nep' is 'pen king'(panicking), I read ya battles,…my first thought was, “what kind of WEAK MATCH IS THIS?”
See my punches land like a string of CLEAN JABS TO HIS…face ’til I have 'nep' laid out like 'KING' MATTRESSES

No SKILLS WITH METAPHORS, I suggest you go QUICK TO GET A FOUR…foot ditch and DIG TWO MORE FEET
Cuz your skills are ROTTING DEATH, and after I BODY NEP, it’s the real KING YOU GON' MEET

I’ll put your RHYMING TO THE TEST and since LIFE'S A GAME OF CHESS, I’m straight HEADING FOR YOUR QUEEN
It's PURE AND SIMPLE, ya raps SURE ARE SHIT, BRO, U SPIT SICK FLOW?…then it's REST IN PEACE FOR THEE since the MEDICINE IS ME

Ya record’s 1 to 6...
If we're 'racing to win'**…then I'm PASSING THE WEAK, and you're ASKING FOR BEEF?...I'll bring it QUICK TO YA, FAM
In this battle I'm the best by far, cuz you couldn’t drop ‘fresh bars’ if a ‘soap’ SLIPPED FROM YA HANDS

common guys whats up with this forum uppin for votes......

^^King Nep^^

^^^ Is that a vote???
If it is...ummm, NO!!!

this forums gettin rediculious so many view but no1 takes the time to make a vote then whats the point!!!!

anyways sla that vote was just wrong bro an there are rules check it out... ur vote dont count but tx anyways u at least made an attempt

King Nep

Search yo posts theres no votes to give props six shots five dropped KO’S//
Wana be mc diagnosed watch me serve this kid fowl like rotten eggs an burnt toast//
the first line personal was a good opener, but the punch fell short to support it. As a stand alone your punch is a good one, but had nothing to do with the set up.
Kid you'll never manage think you special cause you stupid an rap in sign languange//
Your a reject ! Upon conception yo momma went to church to pray for a misscarriage//
im not really feeling this one. You should focus a little on punctuation, cuz it reads weird, and i have to double, triple read it to find where the spaces are supposed to be. I think what messes it up for me is that its a very universal bar, and i have to foce more than usual language, and miscarriage. Not that it doesnt ryme, but not fluently i guess, for me.
This fools clueless while im ruthless! OMNIvore a dead sheep hanging off skewers//
It aint rumors this fags useless loss is gauranteed like a baby having edentulers//
I dont know what endentulars means, and neither does google: http://www.bing.com/search?q=edentulers ... =CT2856425 , that aside the name flip was ok, nothing too special, but thrown into a wordplay made in rather decent. Last line seemed standalone again in comparison to the set up. Very universal punch again. Last word...?
3days for 6bars an you really wana compete? You way off par an you know you already beat//
You come off slow Yo styles obsolete! this is suicide like jumping wit no parachute from everest peak//
Pretty solid man, no real aww factor bu the punch came in nicely.
Ima chop yo head off rip yo skull open i aint joken all i see is an empty vessel//
Now it all makes sense you not intellectual fooling yoself thinking you something special//
rhyming is on point, much nicer set up than what we are used to from you, but it was very open.
Im spittin facts this clowns a joke in raps do the maths check this kids stats whats the sum? //
Battle record speaks for itself 5 to 1! battling me? I gaurantee best outer five you win none//
pretty dope, personal, direct, good. Although im having brain difficulties making sence of your punch. btw, spelling is a big thin, as well as punctuation. It can make or brake a bar.

Omni

Like infected cuts under BANDAGES, my wRAP IS SICK and you can’t come AT IT, QUIT(ADEQUATE)
King? How?…when your battles are so below AVERAGE KID; I must be the trash man, I’ll take your verse and GARBAGE IT
The wordplay is dope man, set up is good, but i feel like it should of read "garbage can it" to match the syllables. Call me the would have maybe been nicer as well.ood opener.
I'm here to RIP YA THRONE, SPLIT YA DOME, and watch ya crown HIT THE FLO', YOUR REIGN IS...
Over, and with weak spits, I wouldn't 'collab' with kid 'sober', cuz I bet a 'nep tune' is 'close to ass', call it URANUS*
lol, pretty funny. the rhyme is rather forced but good none the less. haha, maybe cuz its a personal with me involved, but its funny.the wordplay on his "king" is dope as well.
'King nep' is 'pen king'(panicking), I read ya battles,…my first thought was, “what kind of WEAK MATCH IS THIS?”
See my punches land like a string of CLEAN JABS TO HIS…face ’til I have 'nep' laid out like 'KING' MATTRESSES
name flips and wordplay are consistent making it personal, but i couldnt catch the flow and the punch fell short because of it to me.
No SKILLS WITH METAPHORS, I suggest you go QUICK TO GET A FOUR…foot ditch and DIG TWO MORE FEET
Cuz your skills are ROTTING DEATH, and after I BODY NEP, it’s the real KING YOU GON' MEET
name flips again on point, mixed with a little wordplay and flow made this pretty good, but its still a tad weak.
I’ll put your RHYMING TO THE TEST and since LIFE'S A GAME OF CHESS, I’m straight HEADING FOR YOUR QUEEN
It's PURE AND SIMPLE, ya raps SURE ARE SHIT, BRO, U SPIT SICK FLOW?…then it's REST IN PEACE FOR THEE since the MEDICINE IS ME
didnt find much flow, but wordplays dope, sick>medicine, chess>knight>thee, pretty cool, but no good punch.
Ya record’s 1 to 6...
If we're 'racing to win'**…then I'm PASSING THE WEAK, and you're ASKING FOR BEEF?...I'll bring it QUICK TO YA, FAM
In this battle I'm the best by far, cuz you couldn’t drop ‘fresh bars’ if a ‘soap’ SLIPPED FROM YA HANDS
haha, pretty solid. I like it, good closer

All in all this was a pretty good battle. In all honesty difficult to judge. I am going to say both parties came with nice similies and metaphors, punches and wording, but it felt like omni was battling Nep, and Nep was battling a ghost. Nep, you had a few personals, and a name flip, but most of your lines were universals. As to where omni aimed at you the whole time. Because of that Omni gets my vote. This is an Improvement on your behalf nep, now just try aiming them more at your opponent rather than universals.


MVGT OMNI

Thanks for the vote señor...Me, 1-0 ...arriba!!!

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tx for the voting pd with regards to edentulors its spelt edentulous check it out then you will see why i think the bar wasnt so bad arrghtt

anyways wd omni 1-0

uppen for votes.....

I'm here to RIP YA THRONE, SPLIT YA DOME, and watch ya crown HIT THE FLO', YOUR REIGN IS...
Over, and with weak spits, I wouldn't 'collab' with kid 'sober', cuz I bet a 'nep tune' is 'close to ass', call it URANUS*


best line in the battle in my oppinion.


Punches: Omni
Flow: tie
Complexity/creativity: Omni
Enjoyment: Omni
Overall: Omni


Omni had better and more creative punches ... and they seemed to hit a bit harder than Nep!

King Neps flow was def smoother...he had lines that really showed creativity...
Aumnie-you stayed focus and atuned your lyrics more accordingly...
if yall want a more detailed critique let me know
my vote-Aumnie

K.O.
good battle Nep...
close it up!!!