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In every verse I dominate rap at a constant rate
Any beat I step on gets ate like Jon and Kate
But I'm ignored for rap on the radio stations
Who don't hold a candle to me, now that don't make sense
You were hatin but now I'm hot, karma sucks
My sicker drops are snicker shops, every bar is nuts
When I'm rippin the beat it tends to get crazy
Cause the flow is delivered intense like Indian babies
I'm just with Hip-Hop, tryin to resurrect its soul
And if I'm martyred for this then I accept my role
Some say I'm the kid won't don't act like he cares
But like the Robesons there's something else behind these stairs
I'm light years ahead of the game, imbedded with flames
So once I take control it's never the same
And I laugh at you who think you're a big shot vet
Just cause you got hair don't mean you a Hip-Hop head

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Echo is nice. Quality could be better, but its good enough. Delivery is a bit rushed but still a decent listen. As for what seems like a punch in, if in fact you do, comes in nice and smooth, so no worry's there. Wish it was longer, so i could bob my head more... Oh yeah, your enthusiasm is captured, but ups and downs are nice man, keeps it interesting. It felt like you were at the same level the whole way through. Other that what i mentioned, solid bars man, just lengthin'em more?

I agree with punch dude i really was gettin into it and then it ended lol its a good enough instrumental to make a whole track with.. It Sounded like the delay was a bit off but other than that i really enjoyed it man u got sum nice lines in this one. Keep it comin bro ur gettin better with every post

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Thanks for all the feed guys, I'll try and work on what you said and hopefully get some full tracks out.

haha..."gets ate like jon and kate" I like that, nice punches. Flow needs a little work. I thought the quality was decent but could use some work aswell. Didn't really like the beat but your ripped it up for sure with those bars so keeep it up.

Thanks for the feed man

yeah...im feelin this lyrically nice setups for your punches..i like the indian babies line..i also like the hard deliv style your tryin to bring...just gotta werk those tiny flo kinks and your golden..oh yeah and it def should've been longer ...overall good shyt!!

interesting beat, def. differently, the presence is there, good emotion, the beat just doesnt grab me tho it seems so hollow...lol the lyrics are funny and clevere, kinda short but nice drop tho..

Thanks for the feed

@Rellik, I might try that