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I’ll let it go when ma minds ready the bombs heavy/
Atomic wit it I’m burnin call me mr. acidic/
I’m pushin words to the limit limitless flow/
Killin these instrumentals paintin pictures Vincent van gogh/
Ready get set lets go, distinguishin friend from foe/
As soon as I spot the enemy let him freeze in the cold/
Cold bein ma flow, a hundred and one below/
Hell’s kitchen risen hottest this side of the globe/
Predicate minus the felon I’m flyer than pelicans flyin to heaven/
Developin an intelligent team to scheme cream/
You try to intervene n it’s murder in the regime/
Nothin can come between with such a strategic scheme/
Light bulb of thought similar to a beam, of light/
My flight is takin of by my plight/
I spit it from the inside out givin you insight/
Bruce wayne flow don’t come out on that dark night/

I’ll let it go when ma minds ready the bombs heavy/
Atomic wit it I’m burnin call me mr. acidic/
I’m pushin words to the limit limitless flow/
Killin these instrumentals paintin pictures Vincent van gogh/

I thought these bars were creative, i dont know if i like the limit limitless bit, mite b confusing listening to it.. But i get it man, nothin too important lol

Ready get set lets go, distinguishin friend from foe/
As soon as I spot the enemy let him freeze in the cold/
Cold bein ma flow, a hundred and one below/
Hell’s kitchen risen hottest this side of the globe/

Not bad, I guess u could hav dropped a few better multi's. Hells kitchen line i like

Predicate minus the felon I’m flyer than pelicans flyin to heaven/
Developin an intelligent team to scheme cream/
You try to intervene n it’s murder in the regime/
Nothin can come between with such a strategic scheme/

Whats with the pelicans bro? Dnt really understand that but lovin the multis here.

Light bulb of thought similar to a beam, of light/
My flight is takin of by my plight/
I spit it from the inside out givin you insight/
Bruce wayne flow don’t come out on that dark night/

Not sure how this would flow but i think u finished strong with the dark night drop

Nice man keep it up

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your style is pretty nice man...got a different vibe
your flow is crazy in a weird way
the lines don't match up like they should
but at the same time as I read them they're still nice
good job man, can't wait to read more!