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Lyrics:
ain't got shit to prove but at times i got to
remind all you fucks bout the way i do
definition of a fuck up with a high iq
used to do nothin at all i was too scared to move
the pressure built up now i gotta let loose
for my fam, my true self its time to breakthrough
fight this shit live like its pay per view
im a new man today this aint no deja vu
they try to break you but i say fuck them
no matter if i try y'all will never comprehend
my deepest thoughts, if you reach em u will get cought
and dragged down to the level where i play this sport
raw to the core and i don't mean that im real
i mean that im alive and my soul is still here
grab a couple beers and have a talk with my pops
he the only one that knows that ur word is all u got
this stress won't stop even if you go pop
just do what you can leave the rest up to god
those words meant alot i cherish them in my heart
playing my part smile wide when it gets hard
assault the page, with the rage of a surpressed man
taking what i can the pans and cans of spam
run with a plan thats grand like am's understand
nothing promised on this promise land
go with the flow and get stopped by dam's
go against it and get trapped in the sands of time
trail behind the line filled with people trynna get a piece of the pie
thats a piece of the lie while i want some peace of the mind
im deep with these rhymes, but nobody wanna hear it
y'all dont wanna feel the cold, like walking thru a spirit
i hear this and i see it rise above it like a phoenix
my feet are soaked in holy water labeled as a martyr
on behalf of the game, but i won't die for fame
ill die for my name nothing else nothing less
smoke a cigarette, watchin an army rush me
cool calm collect cuz nobody can touch me
im done with respect an indestructible thug
like the canibus man y'all dont deserve my love

yeah i liked your lyrics man good shit was feeling this piece
here man, good shit

i like your work bro.. Beat is crazy nice... be nice to hear more then a verse tho.. you could do damage to some tracks.. if you good in only doing verses, lets get some collabs going haha... only think i would give to you is a little bit more energy to this type of beat.. other then thats this is golden

much appreciated homie

You could make a dope track if you add another verse or two.
If you made this beat, then props because its dope.

This track has a laid back, "good music," vibe to it. It's short and sweet, no complaints on the length of it.

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I like lyrics, they had personal quality to them and I enjoyed the beat, nice ol school feel...I think the vocals couldve been eq'd a lil better, because they sound hollow so a lil more bass in that area...I thought the energy was good, presence could use a lil work, but overall not a bad piece...

bangin beat and dope flow went wit it, feelin it