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short lil freestyle for activity sake, this sites dead these days, wutz going on????




Instumental - Jay z; "To the next one"





Yeah i got street cred ... no not just a little bit
been taring up the block ever since i was a little kid
slanging rock, moving dope ... main i had da illest piff
find me in the kitchen nigguh mixing with a little whisk
beating up that coke hard ... nigguhs call me pepsi
heavy in da game ... not just another textcee
cuz I make it rain;
yeah i control the storm .. one of dah Dopest born
when fans call, i stand tall ... like i use an obus-form
erything i write is cool ... so call this dah coldest forum
on my same ole grind ... but absolutley focused more
gradually get notcied more ... practically adored and more
i'm actually a force with cords ... get buck bucked like a chicken
cuz ya'll can't see me like i'm fucking up your vision
bars soo hard ... that you Thought i was in prison




fuck it, i'm starving ... i'm gonna go grab somthin tah eat!

I've seen you write better, but I'm sure you weren't really going at that with this piece. More or less it seems like you were just flowing with the multi side of things and keeping it 'hood' at the same time. You did well with the multi's throughout the piece, IMO, except at the beginning with little this and that. Idk, reading it is different than hearing it on a track, and I can't listen to the beat while I read this at the moment. Either way, what I'm getting at is you seem to be upping your game in the multi department. Keep at it. One.

WORD ... THANKS FOR READING IT. Wasn't expecting much feed on this one, was just really feeling that beat that day, and went off on it...trying to ride that bitch! lol


thanks main!