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Haha, So Maybe I Was Was Jokin Bout Bridge Bein The Last Joint. Consider This The Final. . .Guaranteed To Be Enjoyed!

[Half Hook]
This Is My Letter To The One Who Always Set Up
Who Showed Me And Told Me To Always Keep My Head Up
Everytime I Fell, She Told Me To Get Up
And When Times Got Hard, Told Me Not To Let Up

[Verse 1]
Dear Hip Hop. . .I Probably Shoulda Told You This
But I Felt That If I Wrote It Down, You’d Understand My Motives With
How I’m Approaching This, Subtle And Calm Too
With Hopes You Don’t Get Mad, I’m Just Tryinna Get This Song Through
I’ve Leaned Upon You For Years You’ve Been My Guardian
Starting In 2005, My Raps? You Were A Part Of Them
Shit, I’m Tripping. You Were Like The Heart Of Them
And It Took Some Years To Realize I Shouldn’t Have Departed Them
I’ve Gotten Older Now, My Focus Here Has Widened Up
But You Remain The Center, No Matter How It’s Lining Up
Granted, That The Times Is Rough, It Feels Like I Can’t Move
You Always Push Me Forward, So I Wanna Say Thank You

[Hook]
This Is My Letter To The One Who Always Set Up
Who Showed Me And Told Me To Always Keep My Head Up
Everytime I Fell, She Told Me To Get Up
And When Times Got Hard, Told Me Not To Let Up
This Is My Letter, Written From A Quick Drop
Composed From A Lover Who Keeps Companionship Hot
Close The Envelope, Leave It With A Zipped Top
And On The Front, Address The Note To Hip Hop

[Verse 2]
Ok, Page Two, This One Might Be Harder But
I Gotta Say It, I’m Speaking From An Artist’s Gut
See My Heart Is Cut, Sliced Into Nothing True
Cuz I’m In Pain From How The Game Keeps On Fucking You
It’s Like They Don’t Respect You, It’s Like They All Reject You
They Come In, Get Their Fame, And Then They All Neglect You
They All Forget You, But I Would Never Cuz
The Passion That We Share, Is Deeper Than Forever Love
I Always Cherish Us, We Seem To Make A True Bond
And Maybe That’s The Reason Why I Never Coulda Moved On
But I’m Glad Cuz, We Still Making Shit Pop
Always And Forever, 2xS And Hip Hop

[Hook]
This Is My Letter To The One Who Always Set Up
Who Showed Me And Told Me To Always Keep My Head Up
Everytime I Fell, She Told Me To Get Up
And When Times Got Hard, Told Me Not To Let Up
This Is My Letter, Written From A Quick Drop
Composed From A Lover Who Keeps Companionship Hot
Close The Envelope, Leave It With A Zipped Top
And On The Front, Address The Note To Hip Hop

[Bridge/V3]
When You Read This, Imagine That I’m Saying It
Just Know Dat I’ma Ride, No Difference On What Day It Is
True Faithfulness, You’ve Always Been My Carrier
My Love, Hip Hop, We’re Tearing Down The Barrier
They Say You’re Dead, But I Never Saw Em Bury Ya
Committed To You Lifelong, Some Could Say I Married Ya
This Is Our Time, Fuck It, Let Em Stare At Us
We’ll Be The Ones Laughing Cuz They’re Music Is Hilarious
Hahahaha

[Hook]
This Is My Letter To The One Who Always Set Up
Who Showed Me And Told Me To Always Keep My Head Up
Everytime I Fell, She Told Me To Get Up
And When Times Got Hard, Told Me Not To Let Up
This Is My Letter, Written From A Quick Drop
Composed From A Lover Who Keeps Companionship Hot
Close The Envelope, Leave It With A Zipped Top
And On The Front, Address The Note To Hip Hop

okay opening - half hook cool - 1st verse cool
2nd hook- feeling it - 2nd verse pretty good
bridge - decent good close overall a really good job keep it up homie

Aiight Man This Was Nice,The Quality Was Cool Content Was Good Flow Was Niceee Although I Think Maybe If You Switched Up The Flow In Points Made It Faster In The 3rd Verse And Points Throughout It Would Of Been Sick

I love this man, very clean track, the concept is str8, u had couple nice lines in there, especially in that third verse...the quality was str8... it seems as tho ya mixtape is lookn to be pretty good, Im liken most of the ones u posted on here...so def. keep it coming man...if anything to work on it would probably be the switchups, like even if u don't do it mid verse, just try an do it at the start of the second or somthn just to add some diversity....but this is good work

I like it. Hip-Hop is like your bitch and shit. I would fuck Hip-Hop too. That's how sexy it is. Mmmmmmmmmm......Okay yeah, the song was fuckin awesome and the verses are relevant to the hook which was awesome. It was clear but you should have gone different levels and hit diffent parts harder and other parts softer to have ups and downs.

this beat is way sick.. i was gonna write to it but he already did.. but you did it nice.. the hook is real nice.. i liked the energy in this.. way good.. i like this.. your tracks are nice bro.. lets hit it up in a collab soon

This was sick man, loved it

ay bro
instrumentals pretty nice i dig it
you come strong to begin with then u get soft n slow which is really nice man great with the beat.
i like the hook its not bad, a nice reverb or delay mite hav been ideal for parts of the vocals though..
really enjoyed this bro keep it up

Great song.

One of the better ones I've heard on here for a hot minute.

Beat is nice...flow and delivery went great with the song...I like the concept behind the piece...overall dope song...

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I liked the who9le emotion and demeanor you brought to the track. Beat is good and fits well with the concept and vice versa. Definitely feeling the content and concept. Your delivery is pretty dope, especially on the hook. Nice drop man. One.

dope playa, beat was perfect for the concept and you drop the verses well over it. Tight shit

Concept rap is real and I like how you came off on this joint homie. I can hear that you're feeling what you're spittin and thats huge for the listener, so keep doin you blood and stay in da booth!!

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when u read this, imagine that I’m saying it/
just know dat Ima ryde, No difference on what day it is


Good Look!

SICK. JUS LEAVE IT AT THAT