Hip Hop Forum

as i etch this poem, im in a room full of silence
my computer's reppin though, i dont use no papyrus
my thoughts aint set is stone, like dunes on an island
i cant stop my restless bones, but dude i aint cryin
happiness is so elusive i've become a moody bitch
i can't resist the conclusion that ignorance is truly bliss
as your knowledge grows, so does your cynicism to
so what meant a lot befo, now aint meanin shit to you
i mean, just last year i was listenin to eminem
but now you must pass "here" and reach lyrical level 10
im sick of knowin, and bein a victim of my own scrutiny
i have you bitches goin, you know this shit must be all new to me
so i try to reattach the wool, over the top of my eyeballs
but it wont fit back once pulled, i shoulda got me some lysol
to blind myself with but that still wont impede consciousness
i'll just let my higher self sit, and hope for the apocalypse

I like it. Some nice multies, especially the opening 4 lines. Content-wise, this had some deep thoughts in it, too.

as your knowledge grows, so does your cynicism to
so what meant a lot befo, now aint meanin shit to you

^^That line stuck out to me. Flow was steady throughout. Keep spitting and welcome to Illest.

what up man nice drop i think close to the end it slipped slightly but the flow was easy to pick up and you have a good vocab and multiples werent forced

Had some alright multies, the lysol line is horribly forced. Not bad.