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tried to go underground instead of always doing all that mainstream shit. anyways i mixed all this shit down and did verse 2. hopefully ya'll will fill this one more

Yo, I'm writing to this beat!!! Fucking funny. You did come better on quality, but the pitch shift during ur verse threw it off a bit. Your flow is definitly improving. Chorus is a little weird, maybe the tone he chose to sing with? U guys came pretty nice with it man, props. Def appreciate the different topic too

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lol thanx hommie........good lookin out n yeah the pitch shift threw it off a lot....was jus tryna be crazy on it

sooooo much better homie. nice drop. you rode this shit so nice compared to your earlier work. raw beat too homie. keep it up. Verse one flows better for sure but you came clean bruh. nice work dawg.

thanx fam.........and yeah my next song finna be a banger

quality is nice, rhymes is there, not really feelin the chorus, it was kinda corny but overall decent track...kepp it up homie

Beat's On Point. First Verse Sounds Good. Decent Rhymes. . ."Brain Freeze" LMAO! Hook Is Interesting, Not Somethin I Was Expecting, I Really Like The Concept Behind It. If It Was Done Professionally, It Would Sound Sick. The "Lethal Injection" Is Loud As Hell Tho 2nd Verse, Slicka, Ya Rode The Beat Pretty Good, But STarted Slipping. when You Did The Tone Switch, I Was Feeling It, BUT, Your Flow Was Forced, Good Idea Tho. I Liked How U Ended Ya Verse As Well. 3rd Verse Is A Good Story Too. . .I Enjoyed This, Just Think It Needs Polishing. Clean It Up, And It'll Sound Fuckin Great.

This is probably the best track i have heard from you as in all aspects of a track... got a little minor stuff that could be fixed within mixing and all but thats all i see wrong.. your flow is getting better... good stuff man