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Yo, as I'm rippin this beat
I got a flow like a stove as I'm spittin this heat
And I go after shows just pickin my teeth
Cause I eat rappers that try and get in my beef
Damn...you need to listen to me
Let me plague your ears with this sickening speech
Let me portray your fears with the myth of the beast
I'll go head to head with the most gifted emcees
Damn... then they wish n they plead
That my Hip-Hop would stop killin they dreams
But I won't stop, then cops visit the scene
See the scorch marks and know in an instant it's me
Damn...I'm the most vicious to be
Alive when I vibe I hit quick with defeat
You wanna find the prize well this is the key
Pyromaniacs...we go on infinitely



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Ite, Real Short Track. Ya Vocals Come Off Slightly Distorted. Effect Maybe? Or Too Much Layering? Might Be cuz They're Too Hot In The Decibel Range. Some Good Lines, Your Intro Was Nice. I Enjoyed How You Flowed OFf One Multi For The Entire Verse. Did Sound Like You Rushed The "Portray Your Fears" Line Though. Beat Slightly Overpowers You As Well. Flow Was Smooth Minus The Rushed Line, Quality Was Decent. Multiz Were Your Shining Factor Here Bro. Good Shit

Reeal nice man i could hear a great hook over that beat maybe u wanna collab?? I could spit sumthin vicous over this. Get at me if ya interested. I like ur verse 2xs is right bout the distortion but easily fixed.
Good little rec anyways

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-- Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:01 am --

Reeal nice man i could hear a great hook over that beat maybe u wanna collab?? I could spit sumthin vicous over this. Get at me if ya interested. I like ur verse 2xs is right bout the distortion but easily fixed.
Good little rec anyways

like everyone said it was short, but came in with a lot of confidence and strong presence, really brought me in to the song...after that happened tho I was expecting more and got a lil but then the track ended so I def think that if the beat allows u shuld just finish it up cause u started pretty nice, overall good job man

Thanks for all the feed guys