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I Wake Up With Hazy Memories, Of Being Chased By Crazy Ladies
Feel Like Im Dieing I Need Saving, Spot My Clothes..Did She Rape Me?
Check My Pockets..Iv Lost My Phone, Trying To Remember How I Got Home
No Idea All I Know Is Im Not Alone, No Wiser As She Lets Out A Groan
Atleast She Feel's The Same Way I Do, Blank Face...She Aint Got No Clue
Looks At Me Like "Who Are You", I Just Shrug And Say "I Wish You Knew"
Can Still Taste The Beer In My Mouth, Watch As She Gets Dressed And Walks Out
Hope One Of My Boys Can Help Me Now, But When He Tells Me "I Dunno" I Wanna Shout
I Dont Know What Pictures I Took, But There'S Notifications Iv Been Tagged On Facebook
Still Cant Rememeber FUCK, I Just Want To Know What It Is That Iv Done
Cos I Dont Know What I Did Last Night, Bruised Knuckle's..Did I Get Into A Fight
All I Know Is That I Didnt Act Right, Cos This Morning I Woke Up Half Alive



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Thanks For The Feed Man And Yeah Jus Spotted Facebook Doesnt Really Ryhme With Done

This was cool I hope you finish it though
I wanted to see if you figured out what you were doing
this was a good start though my dude, you stayed fluent
the vibe was there and you kept it moving
nice drop!

This really impressed me. Not only did you stay on topic, but you let the idea work itself, and you kept the writing on point. I enjoyed reading this actually. You also did a good job with the flow and imagery of the piece, and imagery has always been your best asset. I think not losing any of that but keeping the improvement of your work going is a great thing man. Keep at it. One!

meh, i wasn't feeling this as much as most ya stufff. You did stay on topic very well, as usual .. and the flow was pretty nice. But not up to par woth some of your usual pieces.

Nice shit nontheless