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Don't no show me.

Consider this my checkin..

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/nep-k ... ml#p162152

such short notice aright lets dance

no reason to delay ya death...

Look

Jack can kill the constant beef , it comes straight from the hands like meals in the Odyssey
You aint built for stoppin' me, coz to notice a Nep Toon i'd have to be skilled in Astronomy

I got the will to clobber peeps, tha prodigy, wit guns & gimmicks, this niggas done & finished
Be in ya gums like dentist, juss dead weight under this potential emcee, no PUN intended.

I’ll Leave you sonned in minutes so incredible, under tha fist like sweater sleeves
I got the better frees, keepin’ U between the W, and I aint talkin’ the Letter V

We need a medic please, 0-2, no way you head of me coz when I spit, I shread ya parts
This bitch aint blessed wit smarts, ya verses are ASS-KING, so I guess ya shit is Question Marks

Rip got text this harsh, , it aint nothin’ for me to drop a bitch in floors
This nigga watched like kidds in stores, & the only Crown King has prolly comes in a box of 24

Jack bit busy ima post a bit late i'll drop G/L

-- Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:03 pm --

Jack ima smack you back to school, in this duel, you get whipped like a common farmer does to a muel!
Get schooled don’t be confused ,enduced battles with dead corpes you even loose now you

Poor excuse for a rapper Wave yo white flag in the air for truce, cause in fact this cat signed up for verbal abuse
You pitch a point wit no cue a rapper muppet that got signed off to join the telletubbie crew
(teletubbies a kids story google it trust me you will laugh when you get the picture)

Its way overdue thats i tell you the truth telephonically in the phone booth
Hear me out this aint disturbing? My attack is to punch an slap Da Rippa around like a batter of flap”JACKS”, for a morning serving!!!!!!!!!

You aint a pro Jack de rippa a stone cold wana be rap assassin slash fashion stripper just stick to yo fukin tricks
The only raps you could do is at walmart for Christmas gifts

Kid let me be honest im polished you spit garbage should get it cured its straight turbuculosis
Jack de rippa a real marry poppins fan throw your raps away like spams now sing it S>P>E>LIDOCIOUS

-- Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:10 pm --

votes officially open..................

Aiigh...uppin for some votes pls.

Punches - JDR
Personals - JDR
Flow - JDR

JDR - did some damage(not surprised), not ur best, but u had some dope punches and nameflips. Flow was good throughout. I like that u, v, w line...could've worded it better but still got the point...dope shit as always...waiting on that SJ battle...

King Nep - I couldn't catch the flow too much. Some of the multies didn't match. U had a few good attempts at punches like..."The only raps you could do is at walmart for Christmas gifts"...but that's too simple and basic, not to mention universal. U gotta attack with direct hits towards ur opponents. Try rewording them for that "wow" effect(I'd give an example but I'm lame and lazy...lol). Nameplay was meh. I'm definitely not one of the best on this site, but I've learned a lot and try to apply what I've read and learned from other battles and threads to every verse. U got potential homie, but against Jack u fell short. Peep the "text help 101" topic in the "center of elevation" thread at the bottom of the forums page, its a good read...g/l man...

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Jack, I'm pretty sure you meant "keepin' between U and the W" but either way, cat sweep to Jack. Omni pretty much said everything I was thinking.

+1 Jack Da Rippa

^^^ yeah, like "keeping U 'from' the W...etc."...sorry for the freepost

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Personals- both had some but jacks just made more sense.
Flow- nep has some rather stretched bars, so again jack.
Multiple's- both displayed a nice use of words, even if some were forced nep, tisk tisk.
Punches- jack
Name play- jack, nep had some good ones but fell short in the punch which weakens the catagory.
Enjoyment- both came with talent, but I just had an easier time reading jacks. nep, good battle but my vote goes to JACK

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thx for votin'
good battle Nep.
-1

Seems to me a KO for Jack.


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