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welcome to Death Row ... Killah!

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Get that electric chair ready!





Find a new home FAGGOT, cuz no one here Cheers for queers leave K's Peers in Tears
we snore to your tracks, watch k get 'more than a scratch' when i slice his neck Ear to Ear
I'm sure Killah's going to lobby this, Dissing Q? but couldn't Body Quix
with that shotty diss!! this guys bottom 2 on the site, n has 'less followers' than a Sloppy Bitch
why are you so Kocky kid? your absolute Assss ... even CI can See-that your MEntal
raps got no substance, horrible content and your disses have Zero Potential
your just a Joke, blow me slowley, then gargle these nuts and choke, homez!
you get laughed at cuz your 'lines are older' than lunch time at an old Folks home
Murk ME? nope i Murked him and Murked Murk but Killah by far one of the worst, G's
he can't hurt me ... when all your new stuff ... is still just as bad as your First key http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/killah-vt12635.html
your a minscule miniture migit its not his fault that he's rattled watch him Fall in the gravel
your horrible kid!!! just PEEP our last battle, and you'd see Q- 3 and K-0'd like the Result of the battle
Should i remind him of the past; Quix owns Killah its been Defined in his raps
ain't grinding cuz he's Whack! Killah's that lil, pimpled faced cracker at the dance just hiding in the back
you shold be picking on Newbs cuz to me, your just a bitch with No-game wid no WItts and Flows Lame!
didn't i just whippp his ass ... now he dissing me?? ... Wow this kids got No shame!
my Scripts provoke Pain .. plus i Talk with his mom; even she tells you to Quit and start choping the lawn
soo up yah game a bit bitch, cuz if i wasn't soo bored your ass would not have Got a response ... Biiitchh!



flip the switch, this nigguh dead! BzzzzZZZZzz
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Re: welcome to Death Row ... Killah!

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Murk ME? nope i Murked him and Murked Murk but Killah by far one of the worst, G's
he can't hurt me ... when all your new stuff ... is still just as bad as your First key
- LMFAO! Keep rippin Q.
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Re: welcome to Death Row ... Killah!

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Quix wrote:Find a new home FAGGOT, cuz no one here Cheers for queers leave K's Peers in Tears
we snore to your tracks, watch k get 'more than a scratch' when i slice his neck Ear to Ear

This was good for an imagery punch, but not too effective as an opener IMO.

I'm sure Killah's going to lobby this, Dissing Q? but couldn't Body Quix
with that shotty diss!! this guys bottom 2 on the site, n has 'less followers' than a Sloppy Bitch

Eh, you couldnt flipped this much better Quix.

why are you so Kocky kid? your absolute Assss ... even CI can See-that your MEntal
raps got no substance, horrible content and your disses have Zero Potential

Okay, I feel the diss mode in this bar. No realy punch tho.

your just a Joke, blow me slowley, then gargle these nuts and choke, homez!
you get laughed at cuz your 'lines are older' than lunch time at an old Folks home

Lol this is more like it. First line isnt really my style tho.

Murk ME? nope i Murked him and Murked Murk but Killah by far one of the worst, G's
he can't hurt me ... when all your new stuff ... is still just as bad as your First key

I laughed at this, but I dont actually think its true. First line was a solid set up. Good bar here.

your a minscule miniture migit its not his fault that he's rattled watch him Fall in the gravel
your horrible kid!!! just PEEP our last battle, and you'd see Q- 3 and K-0'd like the Result of the battle

This was a great concept, seemed to me you could've worded it a little different to make it more effective. I mean, the punch is there, just something was off to me. Not sure exactly what. Maybe you know what I'm getting at though.

Should i remind him of the past; Quix owns Killah its been Defined in his raps
ain't grinding cuz he's Whack! Killah's that lil, pimpled faced cracker at the dance just hiding in the back

This wasnt very effective IMO.

you shold be picking on Newbs cuz to me, your just a bitch with No-game wid no WItts and Flows Lame!
didn't i just whippp his ass ... now he dissing me?? ... Wow this kids got No shame!

Eh, this isnt as effective either... Seems filler like.

my Scripts provoke Pain .. plus i Talk with his mom; even she tells you to Quit and start choping the lawn
soo up yah game a bit bitch, cuz if i wasn't soo bored your ass would not have Got a response ... Biiitchh!

First line seems forced. Last line was pretty effective.

Man, I have seem you come alot harder in your disses, and the last battle verse you wrote at him was alot more effective with the nameflips/wordplay/punchlines... I think you should have added more of that flavor into these disses, and it wouldve been on point. Upz.
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Re: welcome to Death Row ... Killah!

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Well, thanks to the both of you for leaving some feed foh a nigguh! its much apprecated
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