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Slicka
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I DID VERSE 1&3 finally got the quality down lemme know fams
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It's alright man, it's a bit cheesy lol, i didn't think the quality was that great, sound's like your other tracks tbh, the hook was alright, not my style and shit though, the second guy was pretty decent too, not a bad track overall man.. this for your girl?
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yes...and kind of lol^
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dude the quaity is there. nice work, and on my system the mixing was good. but verse two outshined you dawg. im not at all bein a dick dawg just tryin to elevate. your producing skills are comin up but you gotta "RIDE THE BEAT YO". i know i sound like a broken record pimp. trust me, i know. but thats all your lackin. your lyrics are there fir mainstream radio type stuff. chicks would love this track if your flow matched the beat. focus on that bro. one love
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^appreciate it blok n yeah i know im still workin on that.....got lots ta do
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yeah i know didnt have no reverb/flanger on it tho

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thanx for the feed yez..........and yeah i was reading it off paper lmao
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