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catching mit

Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 8:43 am
by Haz
Soon a new year so let me lift this off of my chest
serving awareness can't get offaed neglect
Lost in regret, feel like I can't go off cause respect
I won't be a loser, once they're tossing um Checks
Shine when I rhyme i'll floss with a breath
Ambition as I stray... Caution in Depth
Coughing when stress, stresses losses Iv'e kept
Inside just to use as a Out Let
Like a New Version.. Abuse ain't out yet
In Pride I remain the King of Lying
thinking I could be happy through the things I'm buying
Like I can bring back the past through rings I'm eyeing
I can't see a match of Me attached, to a Diamond
that'll be worn out, Materialism Mind fucking Me Like whore house
See my life is filled with screams n crisis
take care of friends N family the dream is priceless
It goes beyond that due to Long back
A heart with warm intentions while Reality Seems to Ice It
Still showing people as fresh breaths, when they're seeming lifeless
Devil wants to steal my rightful soul, So I jot good Music Like
Demon Bite this, My chick thinks i'm Testing tits Undressing Clits
Its Like I Joke with a ghost, she asking "who you Messing with?!"
Ear plugging the convo till i'm Def in it.. I tell her what
a Bless this is, she says i'm in a hole sign of me whole is Less the Pic
Never 100% so she says this isn't Definite...
when it comes to our relation, I never flag down a bird, I'm repping it
I ain't white flag Accepting it...She starts saying names Randomly Like
a Messed Up List, Never pitch a hit at the chick i'm with
so i'm Catching Fists...With the Hand I play as My catching Mit ..

Re: catching mit

Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 9:50 am
by Scrapa
In Pride I remain the King of Lying

Good play on words with that line

See my life is filled with screams n crisis
take care of friends N family the dream is priceless
It goes beyond that due to Long back
A heart with warm intentions while Reality Seems to Ice It

These four just flowed with a great mixing rhyme scheme

Ear plugging the convo till i'm Def in it.. I tell her what
a Bless this is, she says i'm in a hole sign of me whole is Less the Pic
Never 100% so she says this isn't Definite...

another good play on words

I ain't white flag Accepting it...

a good play on words for not giving up tight

Overall a good drop

Re: catching mit

Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 3:35 pm
by QwarterZ
This was pretty dope Haz, a nice play on words
the concepts came together nicely, took your game to a higher echelon I think
smooth transitions through a majority of the piece
a few played concepts, here and there, nothing too bad though
still brought a old school vibe with it though while being conciously aware of materialism
nice drop my friend keep it up!

Re: catching mit

Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:16 am
by Kau the Lion
Definitely a topic I'm sure a lot of guys here can relate to. Flow was smooth helped along by some decent multies. The wordplay was especially nice. Overall, a tight piece.