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You keep saying to yourself you’re truly not whack
but you don’t speak my language, I’m fluent at rap.
So what you gonna do when that ruthless cat Jack
stops using your ass as a human backpack.
Your crew is half whack as a matter of fact
I mean you balance out the skill of the other three vets.
Sucking up each thread each time retread.
They should drop you from your own crew for some fucking respect.
Man, fuck what he says and fuck his weak text
You’ll never be hard, Quix, so suck on these bars, kid.
Your mouth is free parking for hard dicks, you mark trick.
And if you’re a man of your word you must be fucking retarded.
You spend too much time creating personals for Rugged,
but you ain’t come close to hurting him or nothing.
Although, I admit your punchlines are certainly destructive.
The English language always getting murked between the punches.
So, assert your weak assumptions, you ain’t hitting home.
Quix just a hot head, I’m flaming his dome.
Your colossal rape’s the only time you laid with the chrome.
And your bitching there was older than David the Gnome.
You spit the same ol’ same ol’, punches unrelated.
To whoever you’re facing, but you think you’re underrated.
Cause your fucking ego’s so overinflated.
Though You Could Probably Spit Nice If You’d Just be More Creative

decent free. Went a lil basic at time. Some decent personals in there. Flow was on point. Overall decent drop brotha.

Thanks for peeping it, Jack.

honestly this would have been above average IF you could focus on more original jabs...i mean The dick riding thing has been done, and done, and done ... and not even true. Replacing Scott James name with JAck doesn't make a new punch.


other then that ^^^ and a couple forced multies this came pretty nice, this started slow...came a better near the end

That wasn't about dick riding, it's about Jack carrying you through this whole feud thing. I dunno, unless you wear backpacks on your dick?

This was cool Kau, you got your multi's going nicely
the flow came along sickly at times, a few times it slipped
but it kept a decent pace at the same time...few nice lines
I need to catch up on the personals though...either way nice key brah!

if AJck was carrying through this feud why is this your second diss directed at me??? are you scared to diss Jack?? or is that i offend you most?

You were just talking shit in the shoutbox that day. So I felt like dropping a few bars. I'm not afraid of Jack at all. In fact, I'd like to get a rematch against him. I think I'd fair much better now.

aigh cool ^ fair enough!

Although, I admit your punchlines are certainly destructive.
The English language always getting murked between the punches.

-- LMFAO good personal Kau. Love this crew battle shit.

"So what you gonna do when that ruthless cat Jack
stops using your ass as a human backpack."
that was dope in general, paticuarly liked the line i quoted. everything flows pretty sweet aswell. cant complain at all. nice!