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put ya hands up
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 3:50 am
by Slicka
this is me, my 2 year old niece which flowed by herself jus told her what to say didnt move none of her words in the chorus she left parts out that we had to fill in and my brother in law
-- Fri Jan 21, 2011 4:03 am --
lemme know what you guys think
Re: put ya hands up
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:05 am
by Alvin
beats... pop-e lol. your very first put your hands up came in a little rough. Fade that track in to smooth it. Your niece sounds awesome lol. Your flow is getting pretty solid man, only thing id ask of you is to start focusing on delivery, it might help smoother the flow all the way if you switched it up here and there. You kind of fell off at the end of your verse, but no biggie. Brother in laws verse is pretty good, dubs are weird here and there, but good lyrical and delivery. All in all pretty damn good man. Its cool to do music with fam, have some fun type of stuff. Good she-yet man.
pay it forward mayne:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/pre-v ... 20249.html
Re: put ya hands up
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:34 am
by Slicka
thanx punch yeah she surprised me lol n im tryn.......
Re: put ya hands up
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:25 am
by blokB
u should sign that little girl! she rocks the mic. haha. nice drop fam i love the idea here bro. and your bro inlaws verse shined bright to me. i love the lyrical content in that verse fo sure, keep it up homie.
Re: put ya hands up
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:28 am
by Quix
Damn, i liked it! Mellow beat smooth .. and the content and quality were pretty nice.
the flow was a bit choppy at times vyt overall you seemed to be on point. I Didn't like the hook tho man, seemed a bit too high pitched...maybe if you went the opposite direction and threw a deep voice on that. But hey who am i ... its your shit man and i like most the stuff you've done.
Re: put ya hands up
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:45 am
by 2xS
Ite, So An Upbeat Instrumental I Like. . .HAHAHA YOOO That Chorus Is What's Up!!!! Yo I really Like That Man! Mad Respect And Props. It Sounds Really Good. Delivery Got A Little Better Too!!! Quality Is Good Too. The 2nd Chorus Sounds Better Than The First On Your Delivery As Well. Neice Messed Up But It's Cute Lol. Ya Brother In Law Went In Good. Good Delivery N Presence. I Really Like This Joint Man. Probably My Favorite From You
Re: put ya hands up
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:32 pm
by Slicka
thanx 2xs that little bit of advice changed a lot of shit lol.........and yeah my niece be doing all that dancing shit n be tryna sing n shit lol......jus told her what to say n she went right in lol............