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MONEY FT ANONIMOUS
Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 10:47 am
by Slicka
alright this the song i just did today mixed down.....
chorus i did 1st and 2nd 5th and 6th bar
and verse 1
anonimous did 3rd n 4th bar in chorus and 7th n 8th
2xs took ya advice on that shit.......here the outcome
Re: MONEY FT ANONIMOUS
Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 12:57 pm
by Alvin
money money money huh? Maybe a tone lower on your pitch shifter, but its ok. Yo, your flow is getting way better man. The sound quality is too. Topics not really my style, but it sounds kewl. Maybe turn your vocals up a tad, beat kinda overpowers you. Second verse sounds good. Its not you so I aint wasting my time. Impressive all in all man, good shit. I like how your developing. Find yourself homie.
pay it forward:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/dange ... 20272.html
Re: MONEY FT ANONIMOUS
Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 10:22 pm
by Slicka
thanx fam i appreciate it^ and yeah i do need turn my verse up a little
Re: MONEY FT ANONIMOUS
Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 3:35 am
by IntrinsicCadence
Your gettin' better at flowin with the beat, still has some room for improvement, but hearin definite progress on that front. But you've gotta find some better shit to talk about, more meaningful and/or personal etcetcetc. The shallow lyrics baskin' in materialistic nothingness makes me wanna punch this song in it's gut. Not hatin' though, just sayin'...
Re: MONEY FT ANONIMOUS
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 3:22 am
by 2xS
Yo I'm Loving Tha Beat! Lol. . .Chorus Is Good Too! I See What Ya'll Was Doing With It And I Like It. Your Verse Is Good, Got A Little Better With That Delivery. Quality Is MUCH Better Than What It Used To Be. Really Seeing Sum Improvement On This. A Couple Of Your Dubs Are Slightly Off, And To Fix That, All You Gotta Do Is Do A Little Deleting Before And After The Specific Part You're Gonna Move, And ALign It So It Sounds Almost Or Exactly The Same As The Main Vocals. I Can Teach You How To Do This, BUT, IDK How To Properly Word It. I'd Have To Record A Video Or Sumthing Like That Lol. I'll See What I Can Do Man. 2nd Dude, Flow Was Ok, Sum Rough Edges, But Overall Decent. Simple STyled Rhyme, BUT, It Fit the Beat. good Song
Re: MONEY FT ANONIMOUS
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 3:45 am
by Slicka
thanx 2xs apprecate everything fam real talk
Re: MONEY FT ANONIMOUS
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 3:52 am
by Quix
Wow, i loved that beat hommie! Reall y agree with the cats above ... your flow has improved a ton. I'm digging myour audios man...keep at it man!
Re: MONEY FT ANONIMOUS
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 3:57 am
by Slicka
thanx quix appreciate it