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this i dropped and dude put a beat over it and emailed it to me i mess up but i didnt retake a whateva here

I'm transforming the game like Auto-bots & Decepticons,
maximizing my rhymes terrorizing rivals like predicons,
set it off sucka my heat-flash like menopause,
smash on any rapper that act bad to get applause,
and then your head is gone my mic slice like a guillatine,
you defeat me stop please you're killing me,
i'll smoke you like nicotine,strap your body with c4 explosives and blow ya bitch ass to smitherines,
I intend to be the most prolific emcee of this century,
twenty-twenty-three's list of the greatest will have a pic of me,
I'm meant to be and something never before seen,
I shine with no ice they call me Leeroi Green,
if i dont see no green you aint goin' to see no me,
I'll be in all black with a ski mask like Shinobi,
it's M.O.B. 'til my money stack like ten whole feet,
if I aint the shit whoever is can depend on me,

This was pretty cool man, not what i expected you to sound like. Nice delivery, nice pace, pretty solid man. Somin longer would be cool though lol. Vocals are a bit loud, but solid little drop man.

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This wasn't bad man. Def too short, but you got a pretty good delivery style and your flow connects as my ear hoped it would. You should put some more focus on a full length song and post it up in here, I'd like to hear what you could come up with if you put some more focus on it...

Quality Is Good For What You Did, Considering You Didn't Record This To This Specific Beat. Multis Are Smooth, And Punches Are Decent. You Had Sum Rushed Lines, But In Order To TRULY Say They're Rushed, I'd Have To Hear The Original Cut With Tha Original Beat. But In This Specific Song, They're Rushed. Good Listen Tho, Jus WIsh It Was Longer

thanks for all the feed i appreciate it and if you havent yet you can check these as well

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thought it was okay,quality is good. other than that its decent keep it up.

too short pimp. this was nice tho. i dig the style. like an imaginary battle almost or somthing. nice multies throught and way to rep yo self homie. good wor. id like to hear the rest.

was an alright song. rushed n a few places quality was alright. multis were cool not long enough to really get into a lot of depth but was decent hommie

yeah man i liked this, flow fell off a couple times.. funky lil beat as well
good shit man.. liked the concept and that is wasnt too basic.. pretty good for having no studio... lol

cool concept

i like this kinda stuff

a lil spit polish and its legit