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replied to - I'm Collectively Sick, Son by Jack Da Rippa and 3:16, Milton Ontario by Rugged aka Cory Gunner

I really didn't even care that much to go here with it, but you all are begging for some attention.... Here you go, kids...

Let's be honest, ya best shots, would get blocked in contests, dawg
Illest knows I'll put Jack in a fucking box, and I'm not talkin the garbage ass restaurants/
Smack ya, fag, this bastard's wack, punches breaking jaws and even impact your back
Kuhlerblynd doesn't even see you, and it doesn't matter if you ARE black, or a Cracker, Jack/
After attention huh? Jack looking for love and laughter, when in fact you’re lungs get shattered
How you gonna come at my crew, when you got beat by someone that doesn’t even Matter??/
Say you spit fire and got flames, but damn near everyone you beat aren’t hot names
And when someone comes that’s got game, you run like a bitch, like your battle with Scott James/
These punches leave you bleedin often dawg, this Killah actually have Jack seein’ coffins, ya’ll
We can get right to it, fuck some Expos, like the baseball team from Montreal/
Da Rippa like, why all these bombs hittin me? Cause Murk came armed physically
As well as mentally, by the way, wasn’t Jackie the name of the wife to John Kennedy??/
You couldn’t get claps from fans if they had straps in hand, ya skills been lacking, damn
I’ll get direct with punches that are set up, and take your fucking spot as Illest’s Jackie Chan/

Then I noticed you have your tag along Jill, and it seems ya’ll climbing up the wrong hill
Quix is just fucking annoying Jack, like Facebook requests to play fuckin Farmville/
Why does it seem this dude follows me? Trying to topple me but h’es never harmin me
I mean, I already knocked Cue/Q out of the equation, like this was Improv comedy!!!/
I’ll be all over Q like the stick I play pool with, Quix is a shrew bitch, definition of stupid
Talkin bout how I misspell one word, you do it EVERY FUCKIN verse, go back to school, Quix/
Why is C.I. hated on still? Ya’ll wanna get graded on skill, but none of ya’ll are makin some deals
Watch this fuckin shit, as I’ll ‘son’ Jack and murder his ass, like it was I that gave him those pills!!!/
Ya’ll couldn’t be a high as me if you visited a head shop, I'm sending out some head shots
Quix? Jack, I wouldn’t let this pussy get on my dick if it fucking belonged to Meg Fox/
And didn’t this dumb fuck hate Noble for the longest, now as far as his dick goes, he’s on it
Chokin on words he's cummin with, and I'm not talking bout boxes when I say he's coughin/
It’s like a fucking circle jerk with your crew, should be called E-JACK has met a porn
Quix is like the lone bitch of your set, and doesn’t know a goddamn thing about immaculate metaphors/
Obviously when it comes to cock, Quix hasn’t been fed enough, I’ll have to behead this cunt
Stomp his guts out of him, then clean them off my shoes, like when he met a Rugg/
You should just be discarded in Illest’s basement, Real recognize real? You said that you claim it
How you gonna come at me about grammer, when you spelled Collectively wrong in the thread when you made it?!?!
Expose these hoes, two pros, a SEMI, and a Haz-been-better than you, bitch!
You been chewed up and devoured by any worthwhile name on site, you’re veteran food, Quix/
Coming at us, ya’ll acting like some punks dude, pump you up while my gun spews
While you all search for different ways of saying it, I don’t need metaphors to say FUCK YOU!!!/

Talkin bout how I misspell one word, you do it EVERY FUCKIN verse, go back to school, Quix/
Why is C.I. hated on still? Ya’ll wanna get graded on skill, but none of ya’ll are makin some deals


you misspelled the SAME fucking word 60 fucking times ... i think you should jump back on the short yello bus hommie!

Expose these hoes, two pros, a SEMI, and a Haz-been-better than you, bitch!
You been chewed up and devoured by any worthwhile name on site, you’re veteran food, Quix/


Plus ... this bar proves your personals are a Reaaaach at best ^^

I beat hazzard 3 times i battled him and he didn't recieve 1 vote in those 3 battles!



Try and get some real personals dude


Not bad though!

Lol it wasn't a fucking personal. It was to get under your skin. You needed to explain yourself, so maybe it bothered you a bit.

And I misspelled a word with five syllables, you misspell one syllable words, plus that shit was copy and pasted with editing around each copy and paste. Unfortunately, I didn't notice it. You probably wouldnt have either, if my own crew member hadn't pointed it out. Lol.

-- Mon Jan 17, 2011 2:41 pm --

LMFAO, you spelled shit wrong in your signature too. Dear Rugged - Rigged diss...
Also, if you notice the link to that same thread, he must have posted it up originally as dear ruuged because that's that LINK to the THREAD for that diss, but noticed he wasn't a grammatical animal and had to go back and switch it up.

How you gonna hate on someone when you're the epitome of horrible grammer?

Lemme Make It Clear That I AM NOT Picking Sides In This Lil Crew Feud Lol I'll Equally Feed Both Drops To Make It Understood. I Am Also Unaware Of Full Site History, So Anything Personal, I Won't Look Into.

First Off, I Wanna Say You Deff Stayed Consistent Throughout The Drop. Multi's Were Very Entertaining, And Kept The Flow Moving Throughout.At Times, Your Flow Did Get Rough ARound The Edges, And Stretch Out A Bit, But Soon After That It Got Right Bak On Track. I Never Got Bored Reading This, And That's A Plus. Punchlines Were Fuckin On Point. A Few Quotables

"Smack ya, fag, this bastard's wack, punches breaking jaws and even impact your back
Kuhlerblynd doesn't even see you, and it doesn't matter if you ARE black, or a Cracker, Jack/"

"You couldn’t get claps from fans if they had straps in hand, ya skills been lacking, damn
I’ll get direct with punches that are set up, and take your fucking spot as Illest’s Jackie Chan/"

"Why does it seem this dude follows me? Trying to topple me but h’es never harmin me
I mean, I already knocked Cue/Q out of the equation, like this was Improv comedy!!!/"

"Coming at us, ya’ll acting like some punks dude, pump you up while my gun spews
While you all search for different ways of saying it, I don’t need metaphors to say FUCK YOU!!!/"


Like I Sed, Consistent, Entertaining, And Targeted. Good Drop

Nice shit, the bars were stretched as fuck but I guess that ultimately doesn't matter when you're just writing for text. simple multies yet effective punchlines(which is most important in a battle/diss joint) so this was some dope shit for what it was.

Let's be honest, ya best shots, would get blocked in contests, dawg
Illest knows I'll put Jack in a fucking box, and I'm not talkin the garbage ass restaurants/
Smack ya, fag, this bastard's wack, punches breaking jaws and even impact your back
Kuhlerblynd doesn't even see you, and it doesn't matter if you ARE black, or a Cracker, Jack/
After attention huh? Jack looking for love and laughter, when in fact you’re lungs get shattered
How you gonna come at my crew, when you got beat by someone that doesn’t even Matter??/
the jack reference is funny but played out a lot. rhymes are on point, a little thrown off by the dawg, but it picks up again. the color reference is funny as shit, cracker jack lol. personal on jack was dope.

Say you spit fire and got flames, but damn near everyone you beat aren’t hot names
And when someone comes that’s got game, you run like a bitch, like your battle with Scott James/
These punches leave you bleedin often dawg, this Killah actually have Jack seein’ coffins, ya’ll
We can get right to it, fuck some Expos, like the baseball team from Montreal/
Da Rippa like, why all these bombs hittin me? Cause Murk came armed physically
As well as mentally, by the way, wasn’t Jackie the name of the wife to John Kennedy??/
You couldn’t get claps from fans if they had straps in hand, ya skills been lacking, damn
I’ll get direct with punches that are set up, and take your fucking spot as Illest’s Jackie Chan/
again with the personals at jack, fucking good. even with the name play, nice. I will admit, maybe i don't know enough background, so i got lost a little. but like you said, fuck expos.

Then I noticed you have your tag along Jill, and it seems ya’ll climbing up the wrong hill
Quix is just fucking annoying Jack, like Facebook requests to play fuckin Farmville/
Why does it seem this dude follows me? Trying to topple me but h’es never harmin me
I mean, I already knocked Cue/Q out of the equation, like this was Improv comedy!!!/
I’ll be all over Q like the stick I play pool with, Quix is a shrew bitch, definition of stupid
Talkin bout how I misspell one word, you do it EVERY FUCKIN verse, go back to school, Quix/
Jackie and Jill lol. i hate fucking farmville. i have noticed y'all thread a lot together, so nice personal. Going all Shakespeare on us shrew. the last punch even if true, wasn't very strong, so hopefully its a violent dispute between you two

Why is C.I. hated on still? Ya’ll wanna get graded on skill, but none of ya’ll are makin some deals
Watch this fuckin shit, as I’ll ‘son’ Jack and murder his ass, like it was I that gave him those pills!!!/
Ya’ll couldn’t be a high as me if you visited a head shop, I'm sending out some head shots
Quix? Jack, I wouldn’t let this pussy get on my dick if it fucking belonged to Meg Fox/
And didn’t this dumb fuck hate Noble for the longest, now as far as his dick goes, he’s on it
Chokin on words he's cummin with, and I'm not talking bout boxes when I say he's coughin/
deals pills connection is seen, but ineffective. meg fox, almost forced but nice lol. lol at the personals again, and last time i checked, wasn't noble rolling with them? hence the personal?

It’s like a fucking circle jerk with your crew, should be called E-JACK has met a porn
Quix is like the lone bitch of your set, and doesn’t know a goddamn thing about immaculate metaphors/
Obviously when it comes to cock, Quix hasn’t been fed enough, I’ll have to behead this cunt
Stomp his guts out of him, then clean them off my shoes, like when he met a Rugg/
You should just be discarded in Illest’s basement, Real recognize real? You said that you claim it
How you gonna come at me about grammer, when you spelled Collectively wrong in the thread when you made it?!?!
rhyming scheme got really good here, rugged connection against quix was fucking nice man. again with the spelling punch lol. I never noticed the misspelling lol. A little long but serves its purpose.

Expose these hoes, two pros, a SEMI, and a Haz-been-better than you, bitch!
You been chewed up and devoured by any worthwhile name on site, you’re veteran food, Quix/
Coming at us, ya’ll acting like some punks dude, pump you up while my gun spews
While you all search for different ways of saying it, I don’t need metaphors to say FUCK YOU!!!/
yo this was fucking good. FUCK YOU. The personals hit, name play on there crew to insult.

All in all pretty good opener to this long road, good set on the pace. Just for shits and giggles, i have to say it, check your spelling fool. I hope Jackie and Jill dont get discouraged, cuz orf and kau are up next/

And that's how we roll

haha I liked this. Loved all the personals you threw at me. The cracker jack shit was dope. Also liked the battle references. Didn't know Ruggs dissed you in his drop but some decent lines there too. Multies were on point. Nice overall drop.

Wow, nice one Murk I expected a short diss
but this was well thought out and put together nicely
a lot of the lines I like were quoted already
and the multi's were nice, the vibe was strong
a few lines I had to think about and I was like ohhh ok
good job seperating these 2 verses too, very solid drop
a lil stretched like homie said, but it doesn't effect anything
a fluent diss man, keep it up!

Smack ya, fag, this bastard's wack, punches breaking jaws and even impact your back
Kuhlerblynd doesn't even see you, and it doesn't matter if you ARE black, or a Cracker, Jack/

LMFAO!!!!

Coming at us, ya’ll acting like some punks dude, pump you up while my gun spews
While you all search for different ways of saying it, I don’t need metaphors to say FUCK YOU!!!/

Hardest bar of the verse right here!