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1st verse: Quix
2nd verse: Jack da Rippa


Aigh, let me blast these chumpz

Group of talentless fucks,
ya'll either Trash or basic i'm a clap the fake-kids then Slap there faces
these cats the greatest?!? how? when yah 'smartest member' can't even spell Congratulations
ya can't touch my Potent Crew; ya'll just a Joke to Q, I'm a slap you in the chin and leave it Broken too
Cadance chokes on dudes, and Murk-is worth-less plus your just a 'Fruit, Punch' like Frozen Juice
whipe yah shit off yah lip murk ... you think you tops in your crew?? then Why you with-em?
disguise the victims, cuz now i'm a have to 'shit on Block daily' like Tyrone Biggums
don't need the crew to help to Sink these Lames ... hmm, i Think there gay
cuz we 'only ever seeing drunks with shots' when playing Drinking GAmes
Get a new hobby or goals dude, these chumps scared to beef ... they'd prolly will fold too
others ready spit; but between Quix and Jack We could Body your whole crew

aigh, Jack get at these nigguhz

I aint gon' stab or use heaters on this whack crews leader
I'd rather drag Murk all over the floor like a vacuum cleaner
Fuck that trash thru ya speakers or the booth you speak about
So he givin' Lion the keyboard cos truth dont' seem to come out
Aiight, I did a board search, and Deception is the lame I picked
But he a bitch cos Deception is juss another name for trick
Ha, you juss a game to Ripp, I'm someone you need to look at
You rooks whack, so my conquest like Amazon, you niggas can book that
Fuck a hood rat, Illaborate, you tou gay to look bigger
Quix, play the hook nigga while I snap at Blok like a neighborhood picture
Jack dope wit the flow, my text is like fuckin'
Takin' the guitar hero approach, I juss wanna press the right buttons
They's many forms of Deception, I'm guarenteed to use all layers
Yall still decidin' if you wanna pass or shoot like confused ball players
I guess the truth is yalls hater so now we can play for more stakes
Plex, juss delete their sub-board, we don't wanna waste the boards space

Nice verse Quix. I think were comin a lil short here on havin' some crew on crew fun cos none of em battle.

but it was fun either way

no doubt Jack .. thanks fam

Lemme Make It Clear That I AM NOT Picking Sides In This Lil Crew Feud Lol I'll Equally Feed Both Drops To Make It Understood. I Am Also Unaware Of Full Site History, So Anything Personal, I Won't Look Into.


Ite, So First Off, Quix, Nice Little Intro Lol. You Were Consistent With The Multis. That Made For An Interesting Drop That Didn't Get Boring Or Bland. Punches Were Also Directed Well. I Like How You Went After The Whole Crew, And Didn't Just Focus On One Person. Good Shit. flow Actually Went Fluid And Smooth Almost The Whole Verse. A Couple Quotes

"ya can't touch my Potent Crew; ya'll just a Joke to Q, I'm a slap you in the chin and leave it Broken too
Cadance chokes on dudes, and Murk-is worth-less plus your just a 'Fruit, Punch' like Frozen Juice"

"don't need the crew to help to Sink these Lames ... hmm, i Think there gay
cuz we 'only ever seeing drunks with shots' when playing Drinking GAmes"

Now Jack, Also Had Sum Good Lines. A VERY Fluid Flow, And Steady Multiz. I Was Really Feeling Yours Since It Was Easier To Read. Punches Are Funny, And Not As Hard Hitting As Quix' Were. I Also Found It Enjoyable Seeing How You Didn't Focus On One Member. Heres Some Quotes From Your Verse

"I aint gon' stab or use heaters on this whack crews leader
I'd rather drag Murk all over the floor like a vacuum cleaner"

"Aiight, I did a board search, and Deception is the lame I picked
But he a bitch cos Deception is juss another name for trick"

"Fuck a hood rat, Illaborate, you tou gay to look bigger
Quix, play the hook nigga while I snap at Blok like a neighborhood picture"



Overall, Good Drop.

Hmm, I thought I fed this already...

Anyway, this wasn't bad. Obviously not your hardest hitting. I liked that Tyrome Biggums line a lot, though. Made me laugh. Let's keep this train rolling.

nice verse indeed. i must say though there were some parts for me that didnt quite, errr, go. i mean, dont get me wrong, its dope but there was just something not quite there throughout. fresh though. keep it uup.

Thanks Kau, and preciate the feed PEP!

I Liked This Few Of The Lines Had Me Laughing..Was A Nice Drop