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alright so its coming together better n better

i feel like your song writing skills are advancing rapidly. this aint my style of tune but i like it for what it is. still i think you gotta learn how to ride the beat better bro. like, it doesnt sound like you on point with the rythm or something. work in progress homie. keep it up bruh.

thanx fam i appreciate it and i wasn tryna be to hype cuz my son sleepin n shit dont wanna wake his bad lil ass up

i feel you dude. but you aint gota be hype to ride a beat . just gota be on point with the rythm. but you doin good dawg. smoke a blunt and feel that shit homie. haha

lol not for that song fam.....it took me an hour to write both verses drop it and attempt to mix it so i didnt spend that much time on it at all......this otha song im working on called "What you rep" im puttin a lot of time into

-- Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:42 pm --

so we'll see how that comes out........

Lol, The Beat Reminds Me Of An Old School Gameboy. The 1st Gen, U Know. The Big Grey One Lmao. . .Quality Is Much Better, I See You Been Practicin What I Told Ya. Good Shit Man. Still Gotta Work On Riding That Beat Bro. It Seems Like You're Rushing Your Vocals, Try To Come More Laid Back And Relaxed, But At The Same Time, Manage That Energy So You Don't Come Boring. "No Ifs, Ands, Or Maybes" Actually Sounded Good. I Liked That Part. Good Track Quality Wise And Message, Jus Work On How You Ride That Beat And You'll Be There. I Can Say I've Seen ALOT Of Improvement In The Time I've Been Here Man, And That's A Real Good Thing.

thanx fam appreciate all the help^