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Ite Peeps. . .One Of Tha Last 2 Songs I'm Posting Til My Mixtape Releases. . .Hope Ya'll Enjoy It!!!!!! Not Gonna Post Links, Jus Check Tha Chamber. Lyrics Below:


Hook
It Goes 1,2 (all night) Then 3,4 (oh yeah)
Nod Your Head Now To The Beat’s Core
Hear The Rhythm (my life) Bounce With Em Til Ya Feet Sore (oh yeah)
Let It Repeat More
This Is Tha (rhythm of the night)
Feel It Play (all night)
Fly Away (oh yeah)
Let Tha Tempo Be The Window Of Escape
Close Your Eyes (my life)
Visualize (oh yeah)
And Listen To (the rhythm)


Verse 1
I Gotta Take This Back To The Basics
So Listen Up And Follow With This Track As I Lace It
The Rhythm Beats Stronger As I Rap With The Paces
To Give You All Direction, No Map For The Tracing
(Relax And Be Patient) But Reach For The Essence
Cuz The Music’s Speaking Through Me To Teach You The Lessons
And Preach You The Blessings That Keep On Progressin
With Each Of The Sessions (each of the sessions)
My Defining Moment as A Man
Who Stands With His Dreams In The Closing Of His Hand
But Every Time He Opens It To Glance
It Floats Into Tha Wind, And Waits Til He Grabs Hold Of It Again
The Song Talks, Do You Listen To It’s Wisdom?
It’s Light Shines Brighter Than A Glisten Through A Prism
(the rhythm of my life) Is The Music, My Heartbeat’s Chorus
Just Listen Up For It (the rhythm!!!)


Hook
It Goes 1,2 (all night) Then 3,4 (oh yeah)
Nod Your Head Now To The Beat’s Core
Hear The Rhythm (my life) Bounce With Em Til Ya Feet Sore (oh yeah)
Let It Repeat More
This Is Tha (rhythm of the night)
Feel It Play (all night)
Fly Away (oh yeah)
Let Tha Tempo Be The Window Of Escape
Close Your Eyes (my life)
Visualize (oh yeah)
And Listen To (the rhythm)


Verse 2
I’d Probably Have No Sense Of Direction
If I Hadn’t Used My Raps To Dispense My Aggression
But Since The Correction Was Torn From My Life
I Found The Perfect Cure In The Form Of A Mic
I Was Born In Tha Strife, And Daily Had To Face Fear
I Listened To The Rhythm, And That’s How I Escaped Here
(the rhythm of my life)Is For Me To Keep My Eyes Strait Forward
Never Stop, Forever Drop, N Make Em Pay For It
6 Years Later, Developing The Sound
That’s Now Taking Over, Enveloping The Crowd
. . .With Tha Rhythm, With Tha Lyrics, With Tha Passion
That’s Been Everything That Made Me Come In This Game Smashin
Outlastin The Rest, No Test Coulda Failed Me
I Studied The Rhythm And That’s What Excelled Me
Now Tell Me. . .Can You Hear It In The Chorus?
Just Listen Up For It

well bro. the message here is nice dude. i like most all the stuff ive heard from you to date. once again i will be downloading this and dropping it to my mp3 player. this i feel is a skate jams bro. i could play this and shred the block nice. good drop bro. soothing tune with a dope message. and high quality as always.

killed the topic...another sick drop.not to much to say no criticism from over here. good drop hommie

pretty good you got a nice studio presence hook sounded tremendous do your thang

@ Blok. . .Thanks Man, I Really Enjoy The Fact That People Are Listening, Downloading, And Actually FEELING The Music I'm Making. The Link To Download This Song Is http://mixcraftlive.com/members/1083/audio.php Hope You Enjoy!! Also, My Other Songs Are On There, So If You Haven't Downloaded Them, You're More Than Welcome To Help Yourself. I'm Expecting To Have My Mixtape Released By April-May. So Be Sure To Download That As Well!

@ Slicka. . .Thanks For Listening And For Feeding! You Kno I Try To Keep It Consistent, So Thanks For Noticing That!

@ Leeroi Green. . .Thanks For Peeping! Yeah, Tha Studio Presence Has Been In Development For Years Now, And I'm Still Learning. Everyone I Work With I Learn Sumthing From. And I Always Try To Come With That Energy. And That Hook Was A BITCH To Write!!! Lol But I Got It Done, And I'm Glad You Like It!

I'm impressed. Quality was excellent. I think you could up the vocals maybe a cunt hair. And the sound overall lacked in the lower spectrum but that might just be my speakers. Your flow and delivery were perfect, IMO. I could feel the emotion and I liked how you went back and forth with the sample. Nothing to critique there. I liked the lyrics, too. Stayed on message and the multies were tight. Helped keep the flow steady.

I’d Probably Have No Sense Of Direction
If I Hadn’t Used My Raps To Dispense My Aggression
But Since The Correction Was Torn From My Life
I Found The Perfect Cure In The Form Of A Mic

I thought that was the best part lyrically. I like how the whole thing ended as well. Great job with this track. Keep 'em coming. Looking forward to the mixtape as well.

Damn good, this is def up there among my top two or three fav of what I've heard from you. The lyrics in this are def the highlight for me, easy to sink into in a real reflective way. The kinda hip-hop I'd listen to regularly. I didn't like the 'rhythm of the night' intro though, when the beat first came in I didn't think I was gonna like the song. Not a good way to start off. But once the hooks and verses entered then the stars aligned.

@ Kau. . .Thanks For Listening Bro. As For Upping The Vocals, This Is Still In Development Stage. Ya'll Hear The Pre-Final Product, Cuz I Still Gotta Do Sum Final Touch Ups And Then I'm Also Sending In To Get Mastered Professionally, So When I Post The Link For The Final Mixtape, Everything Will Be Pristine (Hopefully) and Level. Be Sure To Download "The Defining Moment" When It's Finished!!!

@ Creative. . .Thanks! Lol Short Feed, But Ayyy As Long As You Like It, I'm Happy

@ Cadence. . .Damn Bro, I'm Glad It Ranks Up There With You Man. That Means Alot. And I Can See Where You're Coming At With The Intro Thing. Different People Have Different Tastes And Views, But It's Cool.

holy shit dude, i listened to thins a couple times.


I really enjoyed this piece man, the flow, content it was all there main!! uppin for home boy!

Very good song man...you're good as fuck. You honestly don't need any feed from me, you know what you're doing. I'll deffinitely bump this. We should do a song sometime?

@ Quix. . .Good Looks Man! Shit I'm Glad You Bumped It More Than Once! Like I've Told Others, Mixtape Is Coming Hopefully By April. Be Sure Ta DL It!!!

@ Sentus. . .Lol Thanks For Listening Bro, And Yeah, If U Wanna Collab, Shoot Me A PM So We Can Swap Info And Talk More About It. I'm Always Down For Workin With Other People

This shit is really nice. Your flow is on point and the delivery fits the atmosphere perfectly. I'm downloading, 10/10 bro, no doubt. Where did you find this beat?

This isn't just good for a net rapper. This is good period. It's gonna get a lot of spins from me.

@ Colossus. . .I Actually Purchased The Beat From "Trackofficialz" @ Soundclick.com, And I'm Far From Just A "Net Rapper" Lol, After I Get The Rest Of My Mixtape Done, I'm Gonna Fine Tune The Minute Details, Then Send It In To Be Mastered, As Well As Mass Replicated With Jewel CD Cases And A 1-2 Page Insert. Then I'm Actually Gonna Be Pushing It Out (Besides Sales Online) To Whoever And Whatever I Know. . .As Well As Get A Couple Radio Spots/Live Performances If It All Works Out, Cuz The Station Here Promotes Local Talent. So Honestly, I'm Jus Looking To See What Happens In Time. Not Aiming For A Bunch Of Profit, Just Looking To Be Listened To. . .And As Far As "Bedroom Mic" Lol. . .It'll Be More Than That Here Inna Month Or So. . .Yes My Gorgeous Mic May Sit On A Tama Stand With Bad Room Acoustics. . .But The Booth I'm Purchasing Should Fix That Up Nicely. . .ANYWAYS, Thanks For Listening Man

2xS wrote:@ Colossus. . .I Actually Purchased The Beat From "Trackofficialz" @ Soundclick.com, And I'm Far From Just A "Net Rapper" Lol, After I Get The Rest Of My Mixtape Done, I'm Gonna Fine Tune The Minute Details, Then Send It In To Be Mastered, As Well As Mass Replicated With Jewel CD Cases And A 1-2 Page Insert. Then I'm Actually Gonna Be Pushing It Out (Besides Sales Online) To Whoever And Whatever I Know. . .As Well As Get A Couple Radio Spots/Live Performances If It All Works Out, Cuz The Station Here Promotes Local Talent. So Honestly, I'm Jus Looking To See What Happens In Time. Not Aiming For A Bunch Of Profit, Just Looking To Be Listened To. . .And As Far As "Bedroom Mic" Lol. . .It'll Be More Than That Here Inna Month Or So. . .Yes My Gorgeous Mic May Sit On A Tama Stand With Bad Room Acoustics. . .But The Booth I'm Purchasing Should Fix That Up Nicely. . .ANYWAYS, Thanks For Listening Man

I edited my post before your response.

I'm walking around my house singing that sample. This is a banger.