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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zbKgW8JdKeQ


download it here - http://hulkshare.com/or6ma3cpplus or - www.reverbnation.com/JoelVenom

thanks man appreciate the fact that you liked it man!

no sweat hit me up for a collab if your interested if you got time on ur hands

no doubt,will do

This was pretty sick.. Your flow is crazy and you got that "sound" of rap.. only think that i think would have "spiced" this track was if you changed to flow here and there.. i liked both the beats.. during the switch of beats it would have been tight if the 1st one just went off and then you said "Who turned the beat off" and then BAM the 2nd verse comes and you bust off with flow.. you know.. Yeah its pretty sick, good track

thanks for the feed bruh

Ite Fam. . .First Off I Can Deff Say You Got Quality Locked. . .Sum Good Multis And Punchlines In The First Song. The One Thing Tho, Is That Your Vocals Seem Low Compared To The Beat, Not By Much, But It's Just The Beat's Primary Effect Really Starts Outdoing Your Vocals Bout Halfway Into It. "Only Had A Long Day Cuz She Spent It On My Penis" Lmao I Laughed At That. Like I Sed Good Lines, The Switch Up Cuda Been Better. . .Second Part Was Ok, I Felt You Stretched Your Flow Out At Times, And Also Did A Couple Forced Multi's. The Punch In At 2:28 Is REALLY Noticeable. IDK If You Did That On Purpose Or What Not. It Sounds Ok After About 4 Listens, But The First Time It Was REALLY Awkward To Me. I Liked How You Did The 6 Foot, 7 Foot Beat Play @ 3:13-3:20. Once Again, Good Punchlines Lol "Totem Pole". Good Track Man, Jus Sum Slight Issues I Noticed And Figa'd I'd Point Em Out

thanks for the feed my man .

I like the beat, your creativity gets better as the track progress which is somthing I like and kinda how my mind works when it comes to songs, not sure if it was planned or just natural but I like that feel it makes anticipate that the next line is only going to be better than the previous one. The switchup wasn't a problem for me, I do think you were better on the first beat tho...Your style is def unique, but still hott, so that def. works, I actually need a feature on my mixtape so if your interested Ill hook up wit the beat once I recorded on it....

Well, you allready no the beat was sick, your content is allways a treat .. always waiting to see what ya gon say next!

This was ILL doggy uppin for dude!

appreciate it quix,i barely see you leave feed in here haha but thanks.