Hip Hop Forum

y'all probably wont catch on to the flow, but fuck it i make it work

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S_xm3MwT-J8[/video]

theres too much to fit in for a sixteen
been grippin the ink since the days of fifteen years
nineteen years and counting, nineteen beers im downing
drowning in sin ,with a grin pounding heart,
mauled by memories of a dark part
i need a light to spark up the cigarette
this is a long and arduous process
got no rest cold flesh but a warm interior
might be my love or the liquor from the cabinet
the devil on my shoulder took my head and rattled it
but i combatted it and now im stronger than ever
blu has taught me to let go and dance in the rainy weather
yes i got stress, but fuck it im the best
at the bench press gettin pressure off of my chest
let me digress, and just say
that i might sound depressed but i work all day
so at times i am raged, and dont wanna talk
i take that anger out, when im making art
so why you judge me when im writing bars
bout the problems we all face, not about cars
i feel so starved that sometimes i dont wanna write
man its really hard spitting raw shit on the mic
id rather keep my job and not accept my calling
but i know for a fact that would never solve my problems

I liked the metaphorical symbols you provided like the bench press line and the rainy weather. I would suggest stepping up your game in the vocab and multies. The flow was catchy actually when you read it incessantly. Got that "life is hard but I'll make it" feel.

I agree wit Riggs as far as vocab is concerned. And Yah, it was difficult finding the flow because I can't listen to this beat. Sounds like a slow, dark beat tho. I like the drop.

at the bench press gettin pressure off of my chest
let me digress, and just say
that i might sound depressed but i work all day

Fav bar in the drop which i can relate too.

Nice drop overall